Deep Inside the Living Person

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. So don't stop... Update update update

The background of the story is very interesting, projecting the weirdness of the world onto humans and turning them into pseudo-human beings. The settings in various corners have a grammatical background. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is great. The heroine is smart and capable, not a cool heroine, and people will fall in love with the heroine after reading it. Moreover, the emotional scenes are well described, not mindless, and are the kind of everyday emotions that are very logical. Come on, I'm very optimistic about this novel. In this kind of world background, the emotional drama can be described so vividly , and the narration of the story is not delayed. Just love it I have been short of books for several months and finally came across an interesting novel.

After Cell, I feel that Fatty is going downhill. This book has not been updated at all, so I want to catch up. This is different from the previous reading where I was very excited and felt that no one else could write such a fast thing except you. This book is very mediocre. It is just a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

I have read more than 200 chapters so far. The Mercury Group wants to sign a contract, and a question suddenly arises. The author described the Mercury Group as one of the top five groups, so why did he only see the Mercury Group? Can't you see that the Mercury Group attaches so much importance to other groups? I haven't even heard the names of other groups now. The second is that all tasks and scenes are used to promote the development of the plot and upgrade the protagonist. This is really not a big problem. The problem is that the author is too hasty. A character may appear in a dozen chapters and start to hint at the torture she has suffered. In another dozen chapters, the person will use it and tell the protagonist the story personally. How should I put it? After watching too much, I feel a bit tired of aesthetics, and I can't build a complete world in my mind. The third point, I feel, is why they are all of a similar genre, and the reason why Daogui is so popular is that the author himself ate the book after writing it. In the early stage, the corner was described as dangerous and strange, but later it turned into something similar to the main god's space; in the early stage, the protagonist hated the creatures in the corner, and in the later stage, there was a female puppet who wanted to have an affair with the protagonist, and a superior grandmother wanted to have sex with the protagonist. The author's second-hand taste is really too strong, I can't watch it.

A Fei's book is still as exciting as ever

Ah Fei's product must be a high-quality product, but it's too short. Not to mention the boy's early writing style, the word count is quite sufficient.

Update, are you sorry for so little? Is it worthy of readers? Donkeys don't dare to rest like this. Can it last longer?[Emot=default,63/]

The heroine's presence is too low and her character is not likable. The second heroine, Hana Yuan, is more like the heroine (ps: I like the male protagonist but was qfed). The author's writing skills are not very good. The title and the use of writing techniques give me a feeling of junior high school Chinese language.

Why do I have a familiar feeling? Although many innocent people died because of my actions, my heart is still kind

I believe Ah Fei, please write quickly, write quickly, write quickly