General of the Song Dynasty

Tell me what you think. This book has some outstanding features. For example, it is written from an economics perspective, which is very unique. But it is undeniable that there are also quite a few poisonous points. The author has seriously lowered the IQ of the ancients. He writes as if only the protagonist can think. Moreover, the character descriptions of some characters are seriously inconsistent with those in the history books. I suggest that the author respect the historical data and make the novel more rigorous.

A very good historical novel with a strong visual sense, a macroscopic description of the background and environment of the time, as well as a detailed description of the characters and small scenes.

This book can be written with more than 1,000 chapters. I admire the author quite a lot, but he is far from a master. I suggest the author read the book "The Rise of a Poor Family". The gap is too big. The Rise of the Humble Family is rigorous and does not deviate from history. Where is this book? The protagonist has traveled through his soul to a 12-year-old child who has never traveled far and has never been educated (reading). He spends all day digging out bird eggs and fishing in the water. He looks like a naughty child. He can sell stories to storytellers after a few days of soul traveling (doesn't the author need to consider how the protagonist explains the origin of the story?) The protagonist 2, Bernard, signed the family separation agreement for his father. The protagonist stopped him and told his father that this was the case and even recited the law. (The author does not consider that the protagonist is illiterate and has not gone to school. How do adults know this law?) The protagonist can stir-fry and cook, and it is delicious. (Looking at this in this background makes my balls hurt) The protagonist takes over the restaurant with his parents. After making a soup and flour business, Niu B coaxes half of the shares to those who work without even asking for their parents' opinions. The protagonist's parents heard that the protagonist was divided into shares and did not stop them. He also said nothing (Please, the protagonist is only 12 years old) After the protagonist finished working in the restaurant, he immediately wrote about the Three Kingdoms and asked people to start storytelling. After the protagonist wrote, others became literate? Just remember that much? (Three Kingdoms is one of the four great classics. It was written by a 12-year-old kid who never went to school and was illiterate. It really made me kneel down.) Everyone actually took these actions of the protagonist as a matter of course.

Great Song Dynasty? ? ? Which dynasty still has to pay compensation when it wins a war? What's the point of paying a general every year? Almost half of the civil and military officials in the dynasty, including the emperor, were pig teammates. Excellent generals such as General Yang and Yue Fei in Tianbo Mansion were defeated every minute. No matter how powerful the general was, he still had to kneel down. . . . 🪖🪖🪖🪖🪖

It's too biased towards military attaches. Without civilian officials, how can you manage the country? Military attachés are more than enough to manage a village and a county, but what about a continent and a province? Don't forget that Su Shi, Ouyang Xiu and the others are also civil servants, or representatives of the civil servants. It's uncomfortable to watch.

This book is highly toxic, so readers should be careful! I couldn't stand it anymore. I was poisoned and died after reading Chapter 30!

The writing is very poor, it should be written by a woman, the logic is very confusing, and the writing is a bit unhuman.

The Song Dynasty after Fan Wenzhenggong was really sad. This kind of betrayal was also planted by Zhao Kuangyin himself. He ruled the world with the scholar-bureaucrats, gave preferential treatment to the scholars, and the soldiers who guarded the country abandoned them like worn-out shoes. When serving the country as a soldier, they had to have words tattooed on their faces. How sad!

After reading four chapters, I have to say that the author is also a smart little guy. He knows that if we can't accept it, he will abandon the book early to avoid wasting our time. This author has done a good job! !

It's just that the circle of generals is too closed, it's hereditary from generation to generation, and it has fallen too fast. It's not up to expectations, so it's suppressed by the civil servants.

After three chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's IQ and logic were off the mark. When someone beat him up, he actually said, "I'll wait for you to beat me again next time so I can enjoy you." . . It's so poisonous that you don't want it.

You have to write about your relatives in such a mean manner in every book to feel comfortable. Author, have you also been tortured by such relatives? ? I just read two chapters and I'm so angry.

When writing about the generals of the Song Dynasty, one must learn from Li Yuanhao and his son. Look at what happened to the generals who were loyal to Emperor Zhao and Song Dynasty, Generals Yang, Di Qing, Yue Fei

It was a joke at the beginning. After all, he is also a time travel boss. How could he be so stupid and childish? He was so angry in the past and so angry in the next. Drama

If you don't rebel, you will travel to the Song Dynasty and become a dog slave.

Write a history of the Song Dynasty or make a fiction? In the history of the Song Dynasty, military generals caused trouble and ended up either rebelling or destroying the whole family! If you don't rebel, you will definitely not get a happy ending, because you are under the enemy's rules and seeking death with the enemies of the entire connected "world"! The military generals in the Song Dynasty were born to be the knives of the Song royal family. If they were slightly sharp, they would be beaten. If they were sharper, the residual value would be destroyed! Unless he is essentially a slave of the literati or the royal family, and sometimes works part-time as a general!

④Character characteristics. The protagonist and his relatives are made into saints. They are flawless and have no weaknesses. No matter how cunning and cunning the supporting characters are or how sinister and sinister the tricks are, they cannot escape my eyes. They are very white, very Mary Sue, and also very bland. This is my poison.

Putting things here will stir up confrontation, blacken the area, and contaminate others. I only intercepted part of it, hoping that some netizens would not ask for a hammer. If questioning can allow the author I pointed out to prove that he has no problem, whoever makes the claim will provide evidence. I have kept some screenshots. One of the reasons I won't post them is because you can't help me solve the matter if I post them. The other reason is that if they are posted, they will be swallowed up. I don't mean to offend anyone who likes reading this book, but I can only say that every bad person you support will eventually destroy the atmosphere and ultimately affect you.

When a modern person reaches ancient times, must he do everything the way the ancients did? He cannot be more flexible and secretive. I don't think it is better to swallow his anger.

Scroll through the posts here, and they are all about this book. I don't recommend reading this old piece of junk. After just a few chapters, I felt as if I was being fed a stone. A poet who can write this kind of grasp

It's hard to say until I've read the rest of it, but the first three chapters feel like they're written by women, which is really interesting🤢. I still can't read this kind of old book from 10 years ago...

Does the author have masochistic tendencies? The protagonist travels to the past and talks harshly? If you don't have a knife at home, you won't kill him directly in the dark,? It's just that you're used to being a dog and you're still resisting

Chapters 1-3 were written by my cousin's feet. It's so thought-provoking. I'll be pissed off after reading it. Every paragraph in Chapters 1-3 is criticized, what kind of rubbish is written?

Seeing that I was angry, there was no logic at all.

What I wrote is stupid and makes no sense at all.

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The planting family came out a little early. At this time, the planting family is not yet the general.

This novel is so well written, please give thanks to the author Qing Shi. I also recommend a novel to everyone, "A Military Household in Ansai at the End of the Ming Dynasty". Friends who are short of books can take a look. The author is also writing it very carefully.

I couldn't stand it at the beginning. An adult, an adult who wrote novels, had just traveled through time. His thoughts were too childish. Ten years ago, this was okay, but now I can't stand it.

When I saw the introduction of the pig teammate, I knew that the author was not good at it, at most the forum level was