The Legend of the Stars in the Primordial World

The writing is immature. It's quite verbose. The main character is portrayed as rather sleazy. There are also some provocative elements that are straightforward and straightforward, without any scheming or manipulation. There are battles, cultivation, and self-improvement. You've only read 30 chapters of this book. It's all fighting and more fighting; there's practically no substance.

The writing is like an assembly line; at least the authors are supposed to be moral paragons, but they portray you as a thug, capricious and unpredictable. I can't stand it.

The writing is the worst I've ever read.

The author should think it over carefully before writing.

If it really is like Zhen Yuanzi, then it'll be somewhat interesting.

That's too unbelievable. If it were that simple, the entire prehistoric world would have perished by now. It's rotten.

I've always felt that Hongyun deserved to die!

This book is like a diary entry.

Seeing that they're offered apprenticeship right from the start, I lost interest. I don't know how to cultivate myself, but they have cultivation techniques, weapons, and spiritual treasures.

Can't you use your brain? What kind of crap is this? Killing a fellow disciple, betraying the sect, even the Demon Ancestor wouldn't go this far!