The Legend of the Stars in the Primordial World

The writing is childish. More verbose. And the main character in it. The portrayal is rather vulgar. There are also some provocations that are not wordy or mean-spirited. There is fighting, there is training and cultivation. You just read chapter 30 of this book. Except fight or fight. It's just not nutritious.

The writing style is like an assembly line. After all, he is a moral fairy. He writes about ruffians, moody and unsatisfied.

The writing is the worst I have ever read.

The author should think carefully before writing.

If it's really like Zhen Yuanzi, then there's something to behold.

It's so fake. If it were that simple, it would be dead in the wild. It sucks.

I always felt that Hongyun deserved to die!

This book is like a running account

I was not interested when I saw that I wanted to become a disciple from the beginning. I didn't know how to practice. There were exercises, weapons and spiritual treasures.

Do you have some brains? You can't do anything like this, kill fellow juniors, judge the disciples, the Demon Ancestor is not like this!