God-Given Life

I didn't pay attention to it before. I just looked at it and there were some inconsistencies in it. I revised it a little bit. There should be some things I haven't discovered yet. Let me explain here. I wrote 100,000 words for this book before. It was called "Wen Dong Qian Kun", but it collapsed and a reader raised objections, so I deleted the book and rewrote it. The old manuscript still has some merits, so there may be errors that I missed and didn't correct when I copied it over. Because the work written by the protagonist of the old book is different from the new book, and some of the names are also different, so this kind of error is not plagiarism on my part. Of course, there are definitely places where we can learn from other great things. I admit this and there is no shame in it. I have been working on the manuscript for the past two days, and I will pick it up from scratch later and correct all the bugs and errors. Readers who find any findings can also raise them. Thank you! Please recommend and collect it again!

The plot has been roughly adjusted, the settings have also changed somewhat, the pace has slowed down, and I feel like I have improved. Please correct me.

Let's be honest: writing a new book is really not easy. I don't have the patience to read many new books. There are too many words and it's not attractive. There may be hope for an early revision. Alright. No more nonsense. I have read all 22 chapters of this book so far. Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing ideas are not clear enough. I don't know if there is no writing outline. This book is suitable for fresh readers, but I think the author seems to have a tendency towards fantasy, so it's hard to say. This book can start from a certain point, such as writing, and slowly expand to include aspects such as music, chess, calligraphy, painting, etc., As well as learning Chinese medicine with Dr. Liu, which are all very exciting. But here's a suggestion: don't make it appear too often. You should know that the principle of suppressing first and then promoting is the only way to attract people to continue reading. In addition, the idea of ​​​​traveling from the earth is a good idea, but it is too similar to the earth, and it is easy for readers to lose interest in reading later - because everyone knows it. (There is also a small suggestion, you can go and read Confucianism and Taoism, it is a bit similar)

Finally on the list again. New author qianyue new book list. Member clicks, recommendation votes, and collections become valuable again. Friends who like this book, or friends who are passing by out of boredom, please give me some encouragement.

I don't know when I started reading novels about urban parallel worlds. At first, I didn't realize that there was a system. I had to work hard to pass it, and then I had the skills and the advantages of being reborn! However, when it comes to super powers, it brings a lot of unknowns to this book! Many people may say that nothing is impossible with information from other worlds or souls! Anyway, the front looks pretty good, but when the superpower comes out later, I suddenly feel uncomfortable. Maybe I can't stand it~~ Sorry, I didn't say anything, just nagging! Everyone likes it, everyone loves it, just say whatever you want! Anyway, give the author a thumbs up~