The Immortal Official

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In this world, cheating is allowed during scientific expeditions. Using cheating to suppress the protagonist completely shatters the world's original logic.

With such an amazing premise, it could have easily created a whole genre. It's a waste that Sui Feng didn't write it well!

I couldn't get through this book. There was absolutely no enjoyment. The kind of exhilaration that elementary school students experience is completely gone. Elementary school students are too unrestrained, but this book is too conservative. The protagonist doesn't seem like a time traveler; he's both pedantic and righteous. If he were just written as someone from this era, it might be more acceptable.

What kind of writing is this? What kind of trivial poetry and prose is this? Does it rely on the established setting from the start, or does it prioritize literary merit? A mere student needs supernatural powers, yet he's powerless and wanders around aimlessly. It's a useless character starting with cheat codes, without any consistent suppression or targeting throughout. The content is either plagiarized poetry or articles.

I was wondering why the beginning looked familiar... After a closer look, it turned out to be a book from 2015, which I stopped writing in 2016, and started writing again this April. If I remember correctly, it was quite good back then, but after all these years, looking back at it now, it feels a bit outdated.

This book is really bad! It doesn't seem like a book by the great author Sui Qingfeng. I advise everyone not to try it. The later chapter, "Elementary School Student," is so much better. It doesn't seem like it was written by the same person.

I was hoping the author could rewrite "The Celestial Official" if they had the time, haha. But the author's mindset probably won't be like it was 15 or 16 years ago. "The Celestial Official" still had its sharp edge, while "Elementary School Student" already carries the helpless weariness of middle age. It's a pity this book wasn't continued; otherwise, it would definitely be a great book.

This book is not as good as the previous two, nor is it as good as those for elementary school students; it lacks that lively and energetic vibe.