The Savage Wilds

I have read the entire first volume and specifically signed up to comment! First, the creativity and writing style of this book are not bad! Second, I really don't know what the main plot is, but it doesn't matter much because the current plot is still attractive! Third, if there is no heroine, there will be no heroine. Lao Bai doesn't care about this! Fourth, I think this continent is too big, and the world view is too big... So big that you, the author, may not be able to write it... Just one of the countries was destroyed by angels and the wrath of God... You know, stories usually come in waves. Just like the general articles on cultivating immortals, it progresses step by step after finishing Qi training and foundation building, and finishing with immortals and Hongjun. After you save the country, if the subsequent story cannot extend the larger world view, then readers may think that your writing is good at the beginning but not exciting enough at the end. After all, you wrote really well before...

The Ferocity of the Savages is very interesting. Why hasn't it been updated? If I hadn't seen The World-Eating Serpent, I almost forgot about this book.

Game Alien The background of the story is that the protagonist Gu Bai is an ordinary young man in the future world. He accidentally plays an inconspicuous game world called "Rebirth". In the game, everything follows the principles of reality, just like a real alien world. Players, as outsiders, must find ways to deliberately sneak into the NPC team in the wild. Not only must they learn the language, but they must also fabricate their own origins to learn "advanced local knowledge." From then on, the protagonist and many players in this world began to explore and conquer this "game world" together. The first volume of this book is quite well written, and it completely depicts an original game world. If it were a few years ago, it would have been quite amazing, and it would not be an exaggeration to call it fairy grass. Even now, many online writers cannot do this. In addition, the writing is smooth, and the author's description of the battle is particularly wonderful. The various settings and skill descriptions are very detailed and novel, which is eye-catching. The protagonist is invincible and the characters have outstanding personalities, which is very consistent with the full text style. Passionate and exciting, you can do it if you don't accept it. What I like most about Ninth Brother is not the invincible flow, but the plot in which modern people rely on their wisdom and information advantages to defeat those outsiders/NPCs. It is hard for me to refuse this exciting point. At this point, you may be tempted, but unfortunately it is not perfect. This book is not as exciting as ever, because the author has no outline problem, resulting in the main line being unclear, and the later plots are scattered and collapsed. In short, this book is still readable, but as a game novel written 4 years ago, it inevitably has the problem of aging routines, so you should adjust your mentality before reading.

. How should I put it? The amount of data behind a technology is huge, and you, a human being in the Federation, have such high physical fitness and knowledge reserves, but your philosophical and ideological level has not reached maturity. Thirdly, you, a human being, write like a superman, but you can't catch monkeys, you can't survive in the wild, you have to learn to drill wood to make fire, you will freeze to death, and you can't survive in the ocean. I'm so happy, it's self-contradictory.

Archery is different from most sports. Most and almost all sports involve exerting force from the whole body, while archery is a purely single movement. It uses no other muscles except the tensile muscles of the arms and back muscles. Those who have never been exposed to bows and arrows can imagine a tensioner. You use two hands to pull it - how, what, can, can, borrow! Help! Big! Land! Of! Force!

The battle scenes in this book are really good and I like them more than most novels. What a shame.

Let's talk about some of the unreasonable things in the book: First, in the society where the protagonist lives, robots have feelings and intelligence, and they have certain human rights in law. Why was the protagonist's butler robot Jiang Wei destroyed in the first place because the rich second generation who ordered her didn't want it anymore? Are you going to save her because of her confused eyes? What about your human rights? Second, the reason why the rich second generation does not want Jiang Wei is because in pursuit of retro, the language system is set to pre-Qin Yayin, making it impossible to communicate. What is the conversation between the protagonist and her? Third, Jiang Wei obviously has quite good intelligence and learning ability. She can even modify ever-changing clothes. Can't she learn modern language?

If you look at the author's next book, you will know that the protagonist's civilization is a bit too strong.

Has the author found inspiration? As a reader who has been reading since the beginning, I still want to continue reading.

Looking back at this book, I feel that the protagonist is not as described at the beginning They are tired of being ordered around by NPCs and unable to change the ending of the NPC's death. They want a challenging game and a game where they can have an impact on the game. Later, they gradually became more compliant with the development of the game and stood on the opposite side of the player group that truly affected the world. I really liked the global wind circle. It was very shocking when I read it for the first time.