A Fantasy-Style Master God Growth Log

I feel sorry for the author's other works😭

I wrote it carefully, and I hope the author can read it. Whether you think it is right or not, accept it or not, or at least give me a reply. First of all, I think there is a problem with the main description focus at the moment. Boss, you have to understand that among the countless novels in Qidian, and even the competition among countless masters, the readers who have chosen your book to read it have what purpose they have in order to click on your book, and what they want to see when they click in to collect and read it. This is the most important. The conclusion is obvious. I clicked on this one among countless books. At least for me, I was attracted by the title and introduction, because I think the theme of "the protagonist as the main god, develops the main god space, and is the mastermind behind the main god space" written in the title and introduction is very interesting, and there are very few people writing on this subject. So we chose this one among countless books to read. This is the goal of reading this book. It is to watch the protagonist act as the master god and develop the master god space in another world, and molest the natives of the other world. This is the main content.

It's rare to find a book that I can read, but I've been a bit lazy recently. I wrote more than a dozen chapters during a journey, so what? I suggest you write more about the different aspects of life in the Lord God's Space. It is probably the plot that everyone would like to watch. It would also be nice to have more copies. In the future, when the main god space becomes stronger, you can also create special copies on the earth. You can refer to various games, animations, movies, etc., So that everyone will enjoy it more. After all, writing from a perspective like yours is also a very unique innovation.

Isn't it too miserable? There is only one copy left?

The fantasy world in the computer is really well written, 👏👏👏👏👏

From beginning to end, I really enjoyed this book Haoshui. I thought it would be better if we started charging, but the result is still the same. Many settings were written repeatedly with different text descriptions... Eh...

Change the name of the space. For example, the team of the Holy Glory Empire enters the Holy Glory Space, and then the background description is Holy War or something like that. After all, religion, race, people? Conflicts between clans are always the easiest to provoke. Then the newcomers will be free. Anyway, the guide, as a believer, will continue to spread the misinformation of the protagonist to the newcomers. And the biggest advantage of this method is that you can get the "power of faith" (can it be regarded as a kind of spiritual power...) If these gods do not actually exist, you may be able to condense those fictitious gods as incarnations. . .

The author's previous chapters about the protagonist's growth are all in a serious storytelling style, taking the road of large amounts of information, which is very enjoyable to read. Why has the main god recently activated these cards and suddenly turned into a talkative and showy style? Moreover, the dialogue between the two funny characters lasted for several chapters, but the amount of information was not much. In addition, the protagonist is a mentally mature person who has been tempered in a troubled world for so long and has even killed people. How come he becomes so shocked after activating the Lord God? I hope the author can continue the existing style and not change it again and again.

What is the QQ group of the Great Empire of Time and Space?

The setting is pretty good and the plot is pretty good, but! Can you not always say some off-site remarks in parentheses? It's very funny, don't you know? My heart went up and down when I saw it, I felt distressed! With such a good setting, why is the writing like this? If you want to write in a humorous writing style, can you be more delicate? What do you mean when you write off-site remarks in parentheses? If you can say it directly in the article, why do you have to put it in brackets? The settings are very good, but the reading experience is very poor. It was fine at the beginning, and I felt it was okay. But as I went on, it became more and more confusing, with more and more parentheses, and more and more off-screen remarks. You are writing a novel, not a script! Anyway, I'm very sad. It's rare to find a book that suits my taste and is written like this!