The Ancestral Snake

The author seems to have rushed things; there's not much description, it's like a "fast food" meal.

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Your description is ridiculous. The dragon race is supposed to be the supreme beings of scales and armor.

It gets boring after chapter 11; it lacks any real independent thought or aura! Actually, I've read it several times, but I can't get past chapter eleven every time.

Everyone here writes about snakes, so I'm here to learn from them, and by the way, to advertise my book, "The Evolution of a Little Snake."

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I have absolutely no desire to watch this; it's all flawed. They claim they can cultivate a Foundation Establishment Pill, yet they say eating fruit is the most effective method. Why bring that up?

Chapter Three has many parts that feel rather abrupt and illogical. How did the sign lead him astray? What about the subsequent space, waking up as a snake, and then being enveloped in a seven-colored glow before finally waking up with only a Nascent Soul stage consciousness? How could he have imagined this? It's frustrating. Couldn't they have explained when he appeared enveloped in the seven-colored glow, saying he ran to this place? Reading this is a bit disorganized.

I've seen this cover used in many books.

I gave up after reading about ten chapters. It was bland and uninteresting; I had no desire to continue. And what's the point of the "golden finger" (cheat code) if I don't understand it? They could have at least given me a stronger, more exaggerated version of it!