The Gods Love Gensokyo

When I saw the ending, I was stunned! Because I happened to be listening to the song "You Asked So." While listening and watching, I burst into tears again... Do you still remember how you entered the East? I fantasize about becoming the protagonist in life with invincible abilities and making a grand appearance in the harem... Arrive I fantasize about having some ability to save my life and go to Gensokyo to commit suicide... A fantasyland where the gods love and forget. . . . How many oriental dreams are carried here? I have no regrets about going to the East in this life, and I hope to live in Fantasyland in the next life. This is not just a joke, this sentence is like a belief to us old Easterners. Just like me Because of the sense of oppression brought by life, when I suddenly came into contact with the East, I just treated it as an entertainment game. But as I got to know more and more deeply, and after learning about a place like Gensokyo, I had a vague feeling in my heart. The pressure of academic studies when going to school, and the pressure of work after entering the society. . . But when I look back again, I feel sour in my heart and have the urge to cry. Because I know this is just a kind of spiritual sustenance, I cherish it especially...

The first point, this seems to be a problem that the author had before he changed it, is that in the first chapter, the title of Shemingwanwen suddenly changed from "girl" to "Shemingwanwen". This is a bit inconsistent. At that time, it was "looking" from Chen An, rather than Shemingwanwen "looking" at Chen An. Um, the next thing was mentioned before it was changed. I just saw the outside world. I must have become fatter by the time I finished reading it. However, give me back my sadness! Asshole! (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻, You changed it so quickly, I haven't finished reading it yet! Well, next is the second point, which is about the "girls" who had a relationship with Chen An in the article. I really like to see the author describe Chen An and the "girls" Although the previous story has nothing to do with the main plot (is there a main plot?), I personally feel that the characters are more fleshed out and more sensational (my tears (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻). I hope that the author can add more words after revising it (the word count can be improved). Third point, author, your writing is getting better and better. Please bear with me. I can't stand my primary school students' compositions anymore with all kinds of rhetorical techniques and environmental descriptions! So the question is, which company has the best excavator technology, Shandong, China? ? ? ? ? ? Bah, cough, sometimes adjectives can lead to the appearance of sick sentences, and the reading becomes distorted, such as repetition, which will slightly affect the reading sense. Also, try to use short sentences, not too long, it will be convenient, and the update does not need to be fast (other book friends, please do not hit me). (By the way, why does this third point feel a bit ironic??? This is the consequence of low writing skills orz). The fourth point is that the author's descriptions are very delicate. Well, especially when writing about Chen An and a few "loli"s, Chen An's meticulous care for them. Oh, no, it was them who laid the foundation for the next step. For example, when the second young lady attacked Chen An, tears flowed out instantly. This is love! The author writes about daily life. This kind of description can certainly bring warmth to people, but it won't work if it is too much. It needs to be well matched. At least a few times I read it after a while. After all, this book is very healing! The fifth point is the relationship between the "girls" and Chen An. For example, when Men Fan fell in love with Chen An, it was a little stiff before it changed. It was not as smooth as when Q fell in love with Chen An. Of course, you can increase the length (more braille:-D). I think readers will not mind. As expected, reading your book "Chen An Saves Older Unmarried "Girls" to Get Out of Singleness" is much more comfortable than reading romance novels. The sixth point is my small personal request. As the saying goes, a good work must first be dramatic and conflicting (serious nonsense), so can there be more plots similar to the second lady's hatchet Chen An, and the Shura Field is really sad (joyful) heart (sounding) sick (joyful) crazy (seeing) ~, um, yes, the title of the book should be changed to "I don't know why I fell into the Shura Field among the "girls" in Gensokyo" (I heard that the longer the title of the book, the more people will read it). Really? The sixth point is about Chen An's character completion plan. In daily life, he focuses on immorality. Is that true? Chen An? In mode? The melancholic uncle needs to be killed by memories, so memories are very important. Don't dig holes and leave them unfilled. Otherwise, young hero, I will try my best not to eat instant noodles tonight, but I will still send you a razor blade. In fact, after writing so much, I don't know what I'm writing. However, this is the first time in my life as a teenager to write a book review, and it's a long review (should it be? Although it's a lot of complaints?), So please treat me to a pack of spicy strips! (￣￣)↗——Sorry for the bad writing orz

Surprised, this book actually exists at the starting point? ! ! ! (Reminding me of some bad memories...) It is really a good healing book! ! ! ! Author, please pay for my stomach medicine! (̿▀̿ ̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)̄

While cleaning up the bookshelf, I suddenly found this book, from which I learned about the East and Gensokyo. It's been so long

When I first watched it, I was disgusted. Holy Mother, I can't bear it. But after looking at it, I guessed that it was not the Virgin in the part where the protagonist almost died and had a dream. It's just the memory of the soul that is causing trouble. At first, because it was a novice novel, I gradually started to cry as I read it. I have always disliked this kind of literary youth novel. But I have to say that this Gensokyo is the most touching book I have ever read. It's very fantasy town.

It was this book that attracted me into this fantasy world. This world... Thanks to the author and every reader for their support Thank you

Entering the East with no regrets in this life, blowing up Gensokyo in the next life

The front part is quite interesting, the middle part is pretty good, but the back part is incomprehensible at all. Maybe my IQ is not up to par?

Let me ask, where did Ningchu, the Forgotten Demon Fairy, go?

I still feel a bit regretful about the ending of Kurumi.

Damn, I was scared to death. Brother An lost his virginity.

I just started reading it recently, and I feel that the author's writing style is very good, he has pretty good control over words, and the plot arrangement is reasonable, which is easier said than done. To be honest, I don't really believe that this is the author's first book. If there are any shortcomings, it should be in the rhythm. It should be relaxed and relaxed. Most parts of this article are very loose, so-called endless daily life (laughs). The occasional small plots, such as the second sister's attack on the mountain or the disappearance, are well set up, but they always give people a feeling that they are not lasting enough - that is, they are too compact. Originally, the plot is compact and correct, but in the tone of this article, compared with the soft daily life, these plots tend to give people the feeling that they end suddenly as soon as the atmosphere is stirred up. Moreover, every time the plot ends, the ending method of throwing the camera to the "onlookers" seems to be a little more often~. Secondly, there is not a clear sense of chapters in a period of daily life and then a wave of plots (it is not that there is no, but it seems that there is no planning, and the changes in characters and plot between chapters are not clear.). Although it is not divided into chapters, I think that the feeling of music is still needed, which can guide the reader's reading rhythm, reduce fatigue and the difficulty of memorizing the plot. To put it simply, it is affinity. Finally, let's talk about the emotional scene. In fact, there is not much to say about the emotional aspect. After all, it is the highlight of this type of writing, and this book handles it quite well (if it was not good, I would not read this book). I think the emotional changes of Mu Q, Remi, and Black and White are the most natural. Of course, they are also well-written. I give the author a thumbs up for this. Personally, I think the two characters with flaws are Wenwen and Hina. I think the author of Wenwen felt that there was something wrong with it, and later strengthened the relationship, but it still feels like a castle in the air, and I don't know what to do. Hina's emotions make perfect sense logically, after all, no one usually plays them, but the rendering is a little less, and the emotions conveyed to readers are not so real. It's really difficult to find faults. After all, the author's "hardware strength" is there, and the rest are problems that can be solved by relying on experience. In this way, it seems that he is a bit like a new author. Oh, there is another problem. Some places are a bit "deliberate" - the protagonist silently treats the girl and the good girl will find out from other places, misunderstandings can be solved by chance, the protagonist rarely encounters resistance when doing things, and the protagonist is lucky. They are all unnatural factors, commonly known as the "protagonist's halo". It is difficult to grasp the degree. It can be as little as possible. It is too challenging for the author. Give it a try.

I really like a Gensokyo fanfic, let's reminisce about it

Harem? Push women? Or a monk?

So, is this novel finished, or is the author a eunuch? Let me ask.

Forget it, after reading six chapters, I decided that I couldn't help but force myself. It felt like it was all poisonous. Don't talk about a prequel. The identity of the protagonist is not simple. Even if the protagonist is invincible, he still needs to retreat. Very unfriendly to people who don't know Gensokyo

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May I ask if your substitute is the Crimson King?

This book has always been at the top of my list. I thought it was finished at the time, but now I found out that I was deceived by the name of that chapter. I read it again today. I recalled the moment when I had a stomachache. I heard that the author went to the next station?

Writing skills can be accumulated through writing. As for the overall plot, it can be said to be quite attractive. The only regret about this work is the author's naming taste. I really can't compliment it (tea) To be honest, looking at the naming style of the male protagonist, sometimes I even wonder if the author is actually the author of "The Girl Has a Dad in Gensokyo"==||| Although it seems very late and willful to make this request at this time, I still put it forward... Can I change the name of the male protagonist==