Heart of Ziyuan

1. Pay attention to the coherence of the plot, try not to make logical errors, and don't make readers feel that they are inconsistent! 2. Pay attention to practicing your writing skills. It doesn't mean that the scene is grand, but the description is exquisite. To practice ordinary language to reveal extraordinary artistic conception is the highest state of language control! 3. Please try not to make typos. This will make readers question the author's level. Moreover, readers are enjoying reading and suddenly a typo appears, which is really off-putting! 4. Increase the connotation and artistic conception of the novel. For old readers who have read too many books, all the gorgeous clothes are not as attractive as the resonant connotation!

A good novel, twists and turns and evocative. The writing is well controlled. It would be better to strengthen the psychological description of the characters. There are some imperfections in the writing style, but the plot is attractive and the characters have their own characteristics. It can be seen from this that the author has carefully laid out the direction of the book before writing. It is a masterpiece that enriches the soul. It is worth reading, tasting, and thinking deeply. It is indeed good. I appreciate and look forward to it!!!!! Brother, I support you!

To be honest, I have read a lot of novels, not just fantasy, but also science fiction and military. This novel is very unique. First of all, not to mention the world view, at least the writing style is very delicate and the thinking is relatively unique. Maybe it is just starting now, so the sense of immersion is not that strong. However, I feel that the author of this novel should have made a lot of foreshadowing. I look forward to seeing wonderful content in the following words, come on!

I'm not used to reading books that are overly sexual, and I don't like passion without reason and logic, but these two crucial factors are indispensable for mystical novels. However, the author grasped it very well and did not focus on the positive description. However, I always feel that there is a strong urge to give up on others. The writing style is indeed worthy of praise. From the looks of it, the author I want to write a work that is similar to subverting the world view. It is closer to Yanda's "Sin City", but there are still some gaps. You have to catch up slowly in the future. The foreshadowing is well buried, but I don't know if it will be a trap in the future, so I am going to continue to wait and see, and I wish you to write more exciting articles.

The logical thinking is tight and the plot is not procrastinating. I thought it was time to start my old college career again, but I didn't expect to go hunting. It turns out that college life is just a brief introduction. What can I say about the plot? The creativity is relatively new, but the number of words is a bit short now. It can be seen that there are foreshadowings in the early stage, but it is estimated that it will take a while to be written. Let's wait and see, come on! 🤭

I hope you can work hard. I can only collect 35 books and recommend them with 3 votes! I log in every day, and I'll give it to whoever updates the fastest! Help me add some highlights. The more points I have, the more recommendation votes I can get! Thank you so much to the author! They are all good books, but good books that are updated quickly are more popular! ! ! !

I popped a bubble to prove that I exist. Another night has passed. I can only come here late at night to take a look at the big update. Come on! Upvote, I believe you can create works that are like gods~~ I'm a little tired from staying up late at night, so I won't say more, like it, go and have a rest, good night...

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At first, you only focused on the description of language and vocabulary, but later on, although the rhetoric was not gorgeous, it was very practical and could impress me in ordinary words. You, the author, have matured again!