The All-Agility City Inspector and the All-Strength Mage

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There may never be a game article like this again in the future. If you like to read game articles, you should be able to find out what distinguishes it from other articles after reading this book. To borrow someone else's words, Brother Caesar shouldn't be called a writer, he should be called a writer.

Those who are stuck in bugs, those who cheat, those who make money, those who are professional, those who are internal dog care, and also face river crabs, all kinds of frosty days compete for freedom, this! This is an online game!

What did the author go through between these two books... This one is not as eye-catching as the latter one...

Check out Bard Assassination. To be honest, Bard Assassination is really great. The writing and plot are top-notch. Although the protagonist is a bit weak, he still has a sense of immersion and is super funny. I suspect the author is just here to be funny. 😊

The writing style of this article is humorous, the writing style is smooth, and it looks quite comfortable. However, this plot is really not that bad. After reading novels for more than ten years, I can confirm that this is the plot with the least common sense. The main plot of this novel is the competition, but the competition creators are messing around, which is extremely confusing and unscientific. They actually saw such operations as 100 teams, 50 teams getting byes for no reason, and the remaining 50 teams eliminating each other to advance. This kind of operation. There are even weirder things. For example, in a football match, before the game started, the referee already banned a certain team's players for five games because they were ugly and could only play with 6 players and 11 players from the opposite team. Moreover, in this situation, the organizer only received complaints and let the matter go, and the competition continued as usual. Is this still called an inside story? The background setting is probably the most popular online game competition in China 50 years from now. The most important thing in a game is fairness. Without a fair game, it can only be just playing house. Is it really good to use this kind of background setting to play a kind of playing house that even joking seems to be mentally retarded? I just gave two examples. There are countless plots in books that lack common sense. Also, there are conflicting plot bugs in almost every film, so it's useless to say more. The author's complete summary is also mandatory. . You say your novel is nonsense, and its purpose is to criticize plug-ins and game companies for engaging in inside stories. But you have to have some common sense, okay? You still take it for granted when playing a game that you can kill all the pictures in seconds, but the inside story is directly posted on the table and all the Chinese people still lick this game. Absolutely too. There is also the biggest villain who has no common sense and casually kills dozens of Tianchao Jingyan, and still plays games every day to make a rich life. Could you please have some common sense?

This book is pretty good among online novels. It's a bit funny, not invincible, and not a stud, but there are some places where I can't stand it without making fun of it. I don't want to say anything about the emotional drama. Author, have you written more than 100 words of ambiguity? Forget it, Feng Sheng is really a failure. The top special forces soldier went to play the game... Just to get 500,000 to cheat and win the championship. Remember when Excalibur came out, someone spent 1 million to buy it, right? Um? Also, he made a lot of money selling plug-ins in the beginning, hundreds of thousands? ? ? Author... It's too much money. Feng Sheng, you can go rob and join the underworld. It's so miserable! Then, the development of the game's plot is also chaotic. The various settings look awkward and cannot be studied in detail. I finished reading it in the middle of the night and felt much happier after saying this. Well, you can read it when you are bored

I'm shocked. It's a standard book that was completed in 16 years. Everyone recommends it. I really didn't know about this book.

I usually only say bad things when I comment, and rarely say good things, because those stupid fans will say good things. I only leave comments when I am not happy with the book. I have been reading for four days and have already reached chapter 580 from chapter 1. To be honest, there has been nothing interesting since the last team competition started. It was quite interesting up to more than 400 chapters, and it kept me wanting to keep reading, but the plot after the auditions started made me sleepy... Anyone who has read the book should know that the title of this book has nothing to do with the main plot. (That's right~ This is a book title that doesn't even have anything to do with the branch plot. I chose this title but it's almost over. I didn't see any important interactions between the two protagonists of the book in question. There were only no more than three interactions in my memory, and all three times were gone within 50 words. What I call important is like an important plot where a friend becomes a confidant.) I only saw 580. I don't know if the ending will fill in the gaps in the book's title. After the team competition started in the later period, the all-powerful mage Qianli Jiao almost disappeared (there were more scenes in the game), and the beginning of the rescue of the goblins was almost a two-person show with only Itachi and Lao Ma (in fact, when I saw it, I also wanted to say that the hero and the cute card had disappeared for a long time... However, the goblin section did improve the quality of the book, but of course it was just that) The plot should start to fall apart around 400 or 500 chapters. I've hated Feng Sheng's setting from the very beginning. I personally think it would be better without any inside cheats or the second Caotian Divine Sword. (I really feel that Feng Sheng is the biggest failure of this book. Playing an online game involves so many scenes of real events and has nothing to do with the protagonist at all. This is the wrong place. Can you go out and turn left to the urban cultural district next door?) If the whole book didn't include Feng Sheng, I think it would be pretty good. At least it would be considered an upper-middle-class book among the vast amount of childish articles like Qidian. I just don't know why it's not popular... (Actually, I think it was probably because the title of the book was poorly obtained that no one noticed it) I don't know if you have any other thoughts

It can be seen that the author is very careful in designing the plot, there are many original plots, and the transitions in the middle are smooth, making it easy for people to sink in and watch. The author should be paying tribute to Butterfly Blue. There are shadows of melee mage and full-time master in it, but they are just shadows. This degree of control is admirable! Support the author! I sincerely hope that the author can update this article to five or six million words, but seeing so few clicks and monthly votes, I guess the author is powerless. I gave him a reward of 500 coins as a token of my appreciation.