The Dawnwatch

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The most classic thing is that the protagonist of this book is considered a horse king in stallion novels, and the author feels that what he is writing is true love. 🙂

Lu Yuan pointed at Big Alona: "He can marry her and replace her!"

I don't know if it's a common problem with infinite streaming nowadays. The protagonist must be weak, you must start over when passing the map, and when changing the world, you must clear your skills and lock your abilities. Otherwise, you must not be able to write Infinite Streaming well. You can see in this book, Every time the protagonist changes maps, he rises from a small person Step by step, he becomes a big boss in this world Then he changes the map and continues to be tortured In the front, there is the innate powerhouse of the Shattered Void, and in the back, he changes the map and leads the small soldiers who have to fight with wits and courage. The biggest poison spots should be the Pirates of the Caribbean world and the Mass Effect world. You don't have to read it if you don't want to, but it's just too long and smelly. The author doesn't have an outline when writing a book, and he doesn't prioritize serious matters. After a female character is pushed down, this character will basically not be mentioned again, and it will basically be brushed off. But if a character is not eaten, then wait, long descriptions, and then the plot mixed with pretentiousness and slaps in the face will come.

The most outstanding thing in this book is the "Cock Knot" in Harry Potter. I have seen this spell in the HP circle more than once.

Tie a knot

Considering that space wars are not written, Star Wars and StarCraft are meaningless. Moreover, the technological level of the two may not be as good as that of Dawn. The force alone is of some value, but it is like useless to Lu Yuan. In addition to the convenient time span and background layout, the plot is not outstanding enough. The plot of Harry Potter is great and has a wide audience. Since the power is limited, the collapse of the balance of power is not a problem. The disadvantage is that the perspective of this world is too narrow. The protagonist has rebelled, killed gods, and even saved the galaxy, but he went to the British countryside to save a population. There may not be more than 100,000 minorities, competing with a middle school principal and a serial murderer (an exaggeration). It is very low-key, and if you zoom in on the perspective, it will be more dramatic. After all, most readers' understanding of Harry Potter is limited to the Hogwarts area. Journey to the West is more widely known than the one above, and is also loved by everyone. Sun Wukong is the childhood idol of many people, but because of this, there seems to be nothing to write about. Many plots have been written poorly. The background is nothing more than the conspiracy of immortals and Buddhas or the road to heart refining. The former overlaps with Shushan, and it is an enhanced hell version. It is meaningless to fight with a bunch of old immortals, so what if you win? If it's the latter, there's no need to disturb other people's practice. Of course, depending on the author's ability, the writing is above a certain level and there is something to behold, so I won't say that. The Lord of the Rings and Starship Fleet, these two are just like each other. They are not outstanding enough in various senses. The former is okay, but the latter is not as good as StarCraft in all aspects. The overall plot of The Lord of the Rings does not have any interesting points that can be modified. It is a quite orthodox story of a collection of heroes defeating the big devil. Is it possible to replace Sauron as the big devil? If it is expanded, it will still be the same problem. Most readers only know the plot related to the Lord of the Rings. Of course, maybe it is because I personally don't like the Lord of the Rings enough. Women's Federation, or Marvel, well, you can also just say American comics. This world is what I like very much. The good thing is that it is a hodgepodge and has everything. Whether it is science or mystery, it can meet the needs. The fashion value is high, the degree of freedom is high, the plot is average, but the characters are outstanding. With the strength of the author, he can create original works after the protagonist is inserted into the plot. It must be exciting to think about it. Anyway, everyone is only watching those few characters. The power level of the protagonist is neither high nor low in this world, basically on the earth. There are no opponents, but both the Rainbow Bridge and the Infinity Stones are props that can easily destroy stars (from here you can see how prodigal Thor is, he actually destroyed his own [nuclear arsenal]), and have scientific (lue) research (duo) value, regardless of some complete YY products. The Tribunal of Life and the five gods are all super powerful. There are also BUG mutants like Phoenix Iceman, and cosmic overlords like Thanos. If the strength is appropriately limited, the protagonist will have a lot of room to play. The shortcomings of this world are also that it is a hodgepodge. Victory in battles basically depends on the screenwriter's tricks. Some characters' power systems have collapsed. A lot of perverts are huddled on a small planet like the earth and fighting for it. There is no pattern. The heroism of Great America is too strong. Alas, let's not talk about it anymore. After all, I personally like this world very much. I can say good or bad things no matter what. All in all, it's just too imaginative, and these are the advantages and disadvantages. Not to mention Star Wars, StarCraft, Lord of the Rings, and Starship Fleet, they are not recommended. Although I don't like Journey to the West and Harry Potter very much, I think if the author writes it, he will definitely write it wonderfully. American comics, personally recommended. Well, the official ones are over, I'll add a private one (although it's not my own), Warcraft. The plot characters in this world are quite good, the scenes are grand, the enemies are not weak, there are many tragedies, there are many insertion points, and you can even be a third-party invader. Although in my opinion it is not as exciting as the American comics, but The plot logic is okay (compared to American comics), but the disadvantage is that the original work is visually estimated to be in my lifetime, so I can only make up the settings myself, and the power system seems to need to be reset, otherwise it is not suitable for online novels. I only felt that this world is good after reading a book review in the book review area (I have not read the original work). There is also a private item that is unlikely to be adopted (this one is my own), how about Naruto? ? The setting of Yin Yang Escape and the fruit of the sacred tree are still very good, Yin Yang

The setting of the book itself is quite attractive. I could read it in the early stage, but after reading 10 minutes, it stopped. The author himself is mocking the poisonous points of some novels, but he also wrote a petty, stallion, and crazy death-seeking protagonist. When faced with a big boss, the protagonist is always able to figure out the bottom line of the big boss and go crazy and seek death, which is also great. His ability to survive after death is not because of his outstanding ability. The author always justifies himself.