Blood of the Demon God

After reading all the chapters, I feel really good. Both the plot and the description of the characters are very exciting. Of course, there are some small areas that don't feel right. First of all, for the description of the little girl, I feel that the wording is a little childish in order to deliberately highlight her cuteness. I think it does not need to be like this. The cuteness of the child's description is better described with action and modality. If she uses her language to highlight it, it will look a bit weird. Of course, this is considered nitpicking, but the description of her is still worthy of praise. Next time she comes out of the Valley of the Demon King, she will probably be a great beauty. Secondly, it is still strange for the little girl to appear in Yijiazhuang. Since the little girl's mother was married to the descendants of Tianshui Demon Emperor and was kicked out, the daughter of the head of the Yi family and the descendants of Tianshui Demon Emperor are all people of some status. They can be taken care of by a few horse thieves, and they are still untrained horse thieves. It is so unreasonable that I have been thinking about how this little princess could appear in Yijiazhuang and be met by pig's feet. Finally, it is a bit unbelievable that Pig's Knuckle is born to break formations. Although he confessed that he has specifically studied the cracking of formations, as a killer, studying the cracking of formations is a bit far-fetched. A few points that I hope to continue to carry forward: 1. Mo Feiyang has a lot of character, but he is not strong enough. It may be difficult to enter the Xihuang Blessed Land like Pig's Foot. If he waits for Pig's Foot to be successful in learning, it will probably take many chapters. I hope we can find a way to make him appear early. If it is too long, this character may be forgotten. 2. There should be more women, and men and women should be matched so that reading is not tiring. 3. The calmness and calmness of pig's feet is very good, but you must maintain your temper. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better as time goes by, and the plot will become more and more exciting.