
What Should I Do If I Add the Wrong Point After Traveling Through Time?
穿越后加错点怎么办
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- 2.8M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
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- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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After reading more than a dozen chapters, I realized that your physique is so strong, so your strength, explosive power, and speed cannot be relatively low. However, you are simply physically strong, and your strength and other aspects seem to be that of a normal person, which is unreasonable.
The protagonist is a useless snack with a low IQ or a brainless person. If he didn't hang up, he would be nothing. Fortunately, I pretended to be cool in front of women, but I was worried about it in my heart. For example, the protagonist destroyed the family of his fake sister Qin Yao, and the materials in the treasure house were distributed to 11 beautiful killer subordinates, but it was just for the sake of face, and his heart was bleeding. Even if you say it's to win people's hearts, that's fine. Or if you take your possessions lightly and don't care about them so much, it's better than wanting them all at the same time. And I kept doing some superficial descriptions, and the most the protagonist could do was hug and hold hands. Even the first kiss. The harem is not lewd, and her personality likes to show off in front of women. It really makes me feel aggrieved
The gold finger of the book written by the author has a point-added flow system, but the cool point is very weak. He especially likes to suppress the protagonist's strength so that he can write for a long time. This leads to nothing that feels very exciting, especially when looking at the health bar of a new book. He is invincible at the same level. When he levels up, he can't make a splash, and the upgrade is not fast. It is a big taboo in writing with the point-flow system. The author should learn to write away and speed up the pace. The shortcoming is that it will easily break down later, but the reader will be satisfied and happy enough. (Because it's so fucked up, I have to complain again. It's invincible at the same level, but it doesn't cause any damage when you move up the level. I'm also drunk.)
Real or fake? There won't be a replica of Shandong University in the future, right? Foreign students have such great official power
The male protagonist was insulted in front of the whole school. If that person was stronger than the male protagonist, I wouldn't say anything, but that person was weaker than the male protagonist, and the male protagonist actually swallowed his humiliation.
How can I put it, this book is a brainless and enjoyable article. I thought it was good at first, but the more I read, the more I felt something was wrong. The author didn't handle many details well. Let's talk about the emotional line first. The heroine likes the protagonist inexplicably, and Yao Jing also likes the male protagonist inexplicably. Most of the peers who interact with the male protagonist are women, and those older than him are also single women. Then the male protagonist gives in to these women in various ways, and these women are also kind and coquettish to the male protagonist. As for the male protagonist's character, he is indecisive and brainless. If Yao Jing wants to accept you, just do it directly. If he doesn't want to accept you, just do it. It's nothing to hold off like this. Also, the male protagonist never weighs the pros and cons in his heart. If one person is unhappy, he will directly destroy the whole family. Anyone who offends him will die. He has done so many bad things and still thinks he is a good person. As a high-level person in the underworld, he actually does not want the underworld to grow.
To charge money for more than thirty chapters, is this crazy of poverty?
It was a little better at the beginning, but in the later stage I really couldn't stand it anymore. I gave my opponent whatever he wanted, and surrendered inexplicably. I didn't have any sense of defense. I just want to know how I haven't been sold in this environment where various races are plotting against each other!
You started charging after only 30 chapters, and the third young master is not as awesome as you.
Shouldn't the constitution correspond to strength? How does it feel that only defense is added?
The development plot of the protagonist and the female character is a bit inexplicable. The problems encountered are very designed. The protagonist's language and behavior are weak when dealing with things. The overall characters have a sense of nonsense and do not reflect a sense of humor.
It's not particularly poisonous, and I don't think the relationship between the protagonist and other female characters matters. The key point is that the plot has no climax and is always about interactions with other female characters, making it uninteresting to watch. It's like a daily novel covered in urban immortality. It's okay to read during the book shortage period, but I don't have the motivation to pursue it.
Damn it, I read the title of the book by mistake. Why do I see it as: What should I do if I work overtime after traveling through time?
Not bad. Overall, the author's ideas and writing style are online. It's a fast-food article that can be read! The bad thing is probably that the pig's feet are too licking for the dog.
Can you please be more direct about the heroine? All the other girls are in love, but the protagonist is pretending to be reserved and pure?
Why are so many important characters female
The front part is fine, but the back part feels like the writing has been changed. The writing style has suddenly become archaic. Let me ask you, are you writing in the background of modern life, the kind with high-rise buildings with cars and networks? How can you write the social dialogue of the characters as if they have traveled through time in ancient times? For example, the people of the Qing Dynasty time travel to the 21st century, and the dialogues are full of dog slaves. The slaves are here, and they are full of a sense of violation. I can't hold on to the obsessive-compulsive disorder, so I gave up.
This is a brainless and enjoyable article. The more brainless people are, the more enjoyable it will be.
I'm really intoxicated. Old book friends, take a look at you. Write well and don't write in vain.
More than a thousand chapters and more than 100 comments. . .
Well, the fourth level of martial arts has a strength of 2,000 kilograms.
It should be very delicious to add physical strength. At least it can be done once a night, one night at a time.
Interesting
Chapter 31 starts VIP charging? Does anyone know how to do this?
Did the author just come to the starting point? I read a lot of people in the bookstore. I am the first to follow you at Qidian 😌
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There are experts in the chapter review section of this book. 😶