Reborn Technological Overlord, Godfather of the Virtual Era

Within three days of the protagonist's rebirth, four girls appeared. A pair of twins, a Japanese-Russian American character, and an ex-girlfriend. Oh, there is also a guy from the medical school. This guy has no name. He should be a soy sauce guy. The protagonist and the twins are related. I also got in touch with the mixed race person. How many girls are you going to write about?

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It was not a single-line narrative at the beginning, and the plot seemed a bit scattered. Afterwards, various things got entangled together, and suddenly I found that the protagonist already had a foundation. Of course, this foundation was still illusory at the beginning, but it is obviously constantly being filled with substance. For example, using someone else's stock account to pretend to be a rich person, and using this thing to buy a building. If he had a building, what could he do? In addition, the supporting characters are all flesh and blood, not symbolic paper figures.

The characterization is really good! I liked the twin sisters the most at first, and now I have added Meng Sanmei. Even if you jump into a manhole, you still dare to get gold on your head. Who can do it?

If this novel had been published 5 years earlier, the collection would have been more than what it is now. The slow pace is a problem. Another problem is that there are too many foreshadowings, which distract the reader. Although it is later proven that foreshadowing plays an important role, others may not be able to see the behind. The heroine and the supporting characters are indeed well-cast, and each one of them impressed me deeply. The twin sisters are very cute, and they are indeed worthy of the word "protagonist". Although they are ideal, they are reasonable. Xu Ruyan's plot is very sudden, but it is the most realistic to me. That's how you should treat a strong woman, be tougher than her, go ahead and do it, and do it again if you don't accept it. So far, the protagonist has been fixing everything and provoked a lot of women. By the way, I think many places are written in too detail. Although it does seem necessary. But the plot progression felt a bit slow. No matter what happens, a woman can actually accept one. That's 400,000 words. If you write like this for 20 years, you will be able to write 40 million words! But you only have a few collections, can you keep writing?

Seeing it now, it still feels good. But judging from your collection, I think it is not easy for you to generate electricity for love. Come on, I've already booked it all.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!