Immortality Can Be Expected

I've just read Chapter 38, and it's full of bad sentences, logical loopholes, and incorrect views. I really can't stand it.

Although there are occasional bad sentences, the content of Taoist priests is so refreshing. The ruthlessness is displayed vividly and exquisitely, and the cruelty of cultivating immortals is unparalleled. People who are under great pressure in life can read this novel to release their dissatisfaction. It is so refreshing.

The first novel I wrote was unfinished. Even if I wanted to write this or possibly the only one just for my own dreams, I treated my career like this. When I read more than 600 chapters, I realized that I regretted it to death. If I just casually passed it by, you ruined your own reputation. It seems that you will have to change the author's name if you want to write novels in the future. The following may be the reasons for your failure: First, the protagonist does not have many friends in the first place. For example, all of the murderers he created died. You can use a lot of means to connect to a certain person or place, but there is no need to do this. Aren't you struggling with money? Two: As the protagonist's mortal enemy, it will definitely bring endless trouble and influence to him. But Master Rutie could die in the hands of others in a daze. Three: The plot is too simple, every place is accompanied by a secret place, and the protagonists are all beauties, and there is no new method. It's been a few years since I started doing something half-assed, but how can I make money if I work hard?

Such a good work, why does it have to be discontinued?

Um (⊙o⊙)…the chapter was sent to the wrong one again

I'm sorry, Sheng'er's mother has paid so much for the protagonist, but in the end she doesn't even have a name. On the other hand, the protagonist has paid so much for the heroine, but in the end, haha

Author, you're going to die soon.

Don't touch me, are you traveling back and forth through time and space now? It's a few minutes, a few hours, is your brain flooded and eaten by a dog?

Update it😢