Immortal Demonic Rules

The idea is good, but the article is full of typos and nonsense. It gives people a headache when reading it. It is right not to put it on the shelves.

Go read the author yourself, the whole article is full of wry smiles! Didn't you vomit when you typed these two words?

I've read more than 100 chapters and I still don't know what the protagonist is doing.

Personally, I feel that the author's writing is a bit confusing. For example, Chapter 15 talks about the protagonist's breakthrough to the third level of the technique, but later he says that he is afraid of falling from the second level to the first level! This is simply baffling, isn't it? I'm afraid this math is not taught by the physical education teacher!

What's the name of the author's new account? I'm going to support you.

The further it goes, the worse it gets. Comparing it with mortals cultivating immortality is so speechless.

After watching more than 80 pictures, the protagonist has never eaten. He is indeed a cultivator!

In my opinion, this book is readable.

I think it would be better to rename this book "The Legend of Luck and Immortality"

Lots of typos, nonsense, inversions, and confusing logic. The first chapter is about time chaos. I didn't know what the pig's feet were doing in the first hundred chapters. . .