Rebirth Green Robe

Xuan Mizhu wood spirit bead, spider inner elixir fire spirit bead, snow soul bead water spirit bead, Mahavira treasury dragon bead gold spirit bead, Buddhist wisdom bead earth spirit bead. Or the author creates a few beads of his own to make the spirit of the Five Elements Spirit Beads.

This book does have a fairy spirit in terms of cultivation, which is very good in this aspect, and the integration of techniques from other novels into Shushan is even more eye-catching. Although Golden Finger is a bit bigger, it doesn't hurt. It's a pity that none of these can cover up the shitty plot. The protagonist is just a locust who wants to search for treasures when he sees them. He is no different from other time-traveling fans who have been eliminated. I originally thought that Jin Dan would change his mind after he realized that he was haunted by karma, but he went to search for warm jade, ice silkworms, etc., And he didn't have the temperament of cultivation at all. It can only be said that the author wasted a good idea.

No wonder no one has read it. This book is just about writing a diary, a thesis, and a scientific research report. In the third chapter, a new practitioner will create his own exercises. Later, he will not distinguish between Buddhism and Taoism, talking to himself in a mess.

I just read 'Chapter 36: Refining Forbidden Treasures to Reveal Mysteries'. The innate chaotic Yuan Fei that comes with the green robe can be used to refine natal spiritual treasures, which is very impressive. If you are afraid of damaging the magical effect of the Yuan Fei that comes with you, you can also go to Xuanyuan Tomb to refine treasures with Jiuyi Cauldron and Haotian Mirror. There is also an innate chaos Yuan Fei in Jiuyi Cauldron that can be used to refine natal spiritual treasures.

The new version has been seriously watered down. The plot of the thirty chapters of the old version has been watered down to about three hundred chapters, and the content has been diluted to the point where it is no longer interesting. It is better not to use the background of Shushan to attract people and reopen a world of immortals. Other novels about cultivating immortals are difficult to find, but this one It's a plug-in that the protagonist was a minor character before time travel. After time travel, he casually deduced that there are a lot of top-notch skills and magical powers. This book has been practiced by others for at least hundreds of thousands of years. The protagonist just practiced it casually and the treasure was born. It's very boring to write a plug-in with such a ridiculous plot and ramble on, and it ruins the reputation of the old version.

Even if I stick to two hundred chapters, it's still a problem. The words are too lengthy, and they always focus on small aspects, stretching out the plot of the book, but it doesn't have much effect, and it looks boring. On the other hand, the communication and interaction between characters, the introduction of skills, the introduction of characters, etc. Often require a large amount of text to explain, and even appear repeatedly. The overall reading experience deteriorates again and again, without any waves, and it is boring.

I see the protagonist grabbing opportunities and treasures everywhere, but in a world like Shushan that is full of destiny and destiny, it's not good to rob other people's things!

As soon as I traveled through time, I was thinking about creating exercises. Why don't you go to heaven?

This book is very dull, with various methods of creating skills, collecting treasures, and practicing treasures, but the people and plots of these skills and treasures are not reflected, just like farming and cultivating immortals.

The biggest failure is that some of the settings make Shushan not like Shushan, and the fantasy of cultivating immortals is not like the fantasy of cultivating immortals. It is a bit foreign and not earthy.

After reading the first chapter, I gave up on creating my own exercises. A modern person traveled to the past and merged his memories. He could immediately create his own foundation-building exercises that were better than those inherited from the Chaos Yuan Fei. Why don't you just ascend?

Studying the exercises every day, blessed land, a lot of water characters, no plot

I feel that the biggest problem with this book is not that the gold finger is too big. In a place like Shushan where information is very easy to be made one-way and transparent, it would be impossible to survive without a high gold finger. The biggest problem, I feel, is that it's not that exciting. I have read more than a hundred chapters, but I still can't find anything exciting. I have always been in a balance between pleasure and displeasure. Finally, when I reach a place where it can be a bit exciting, the protagonist immediately commits suicide, which immediately makes people unhappy. I have seen more than a hundred chapters like this, and it has wiped out my interest. So, that's it, goodbye, at least let me slow down for a while...

Shushan failed, stole all the fate of the predecessors, collected all the good talents and beauty, unified the demons, and fought with swords and eyebrows. Ten of them write about Shu Mountain, and twelve of them are impossible to read. The Great Desolate World, Journey to the West, Shu Mountain, and the immortal hero dies!

The water numbers quoted from scriptures are either on the way to receiving magic weapons or receiving magic weapons. Originally, the young people would sigh and pretend to be mature as soon as they traveled through time, so it's time to take things step by step! Originally, my cultivation level was not enough, but Dongtian Blessing opened so many golden fingers as he said (if I opened more, I would forget about it and they would all come together). Personally, I think it should be better developed from point to surface, and the sense of immersion would make people feel more natural.

How to say it? Author, although your writing ability is not very good, your literary skills are really high

The protagonist is a boy who spreads his wealth and spreads his skills everywhere

The protagonist's disgusting behavior in giving away treasures

After reading the first ten chapters, they are all the same as the manual. Are you going to take the postgraduate entrance examination?

In fact, just ending Shushan is fine. Writing about Yangshen is completely superfluous.

It's awesome. It's almost 300 chapters before it's released. The author is a ruthless person.

To be honest, one of them seems to be sick. The author always likes to add some narration. I like to brush up on my presence and show off my protagonist. Use a sense of shared prosperity and prosperity, show a sense of accomplishment with the achievements of the protagonist, and satisfy your own sense of honor. "What ×× doesn't know is that many years later he became ×××××." "…" "…" This happens so frequently that it always makes people laugh. I don't want to think about all kinds of coincidences, writing style, etc. After all, he is the protagonist subconsciously, so I tolerate it, but I really can't bear it, it's too dramatic.

Is this a finished novel or a eunuch?

Green Robe can exchange the essence of earth milk for Tianyi Divine Water, and he will be able to cultivate the water element in no time.

The title of this book is not attractive, so you haven't read it yet? Can anyone tell me what this green robe means?

Shushan+Buddha is originally the Tao+Lord of the Stars