Legend of the North

It starts with a hammer, and the story is all made up. The more plots, the better.

Hey, here I am again ^ω^ Because the article is too long, I picked some to read. The writing style is very concise, and the only flaw is that there are too many descriptions. Personal opinions would be better if they were replaced by the actions or psychology of the protagonist. Then the last chapter also took back the foreshadowing of the first chapter. I have also written fantasy, but it is just fantasy, and the system is similar, that is, upgrading and fighting monsters. I can only say that if it was placed before Battle of the Sky, it would definitely be popular, but there are too many such articles written now, and a large writing style is definitely no problem. It's about the narrative technique. How should I put it? I feel like the protagonist's golden finger is not very prominent. A few immature opinions: 1. Come with an awesome villain, and let the protagonist defeat him. 2. Come with a few beauties who adore the male protagonist, not necessarily in love (immature readers like me want to see beauties). 3. Add family lines and friendship lines to the protagonist to make the characters more three-dimensional The biggest advantage of this article: The writing is concise and easy to read and retract Disadvantages: Narrative rhythm (it cannot be a simple upgrade and fight monsters, there must be a villain, a beautiful woman and wine to accompany it) (A little immature suggestion, if it conflicts with the big idea, the big idea shall prevail)

I only read the beginning, and the writing is pretty good. Why haven't you signed the contract yet?

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After reading the first chapter, I couldn't help but come here to comment. The writing is really strong. I have saved it!

After writing so many chapters, why didn't you sign the contract?

Collected, keep updating, welcome to visit again~

Congratulations on finishing this book~~~~Spread flowers~~~~

Finished this book and look forward to the new book🌺🌺

Well written (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡I look forward to a big update from the author

Remember to call me if it gets popular! Fire tongs Liu Ming! !

Xiaobei, I am a slow reader. You can also read my books more slowly, haha

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