The Silverfish Story of the Warring States Period

Big, I would like to make some small suggestions: the male protagonist is systematic, and the cheats can be more enhanced, such as adding some IQ points, or giving some monetary rewards. This will not only make reading the article more enjoyable, but also make the male protagonist more motivated. After reading the introduction, it seems to be a bit of a sandbox. Personally, I think it would be more interesting to have the male protagonist change history. The male protagonist has traveled through time. When he comes to this world, it will inevitably cause a butterfly effect to affect the world. This impact thus changed history. The advantages are as outstanding as ever: the writing style is very concise and concise, and it takes a lot of brains for readers to read. The advantages of condensation are also very distinct. The style of the article comes out immediately. You can refer to the break-up of engagement flow in Fighting to Break the Sky, which is fun and can improve your strength. It will be even more fun if the villain suppresses the protagonist, and the protagonist pretends to be cool and slaps him in the face. The most important thing in writing a novel is to use strengths and avoid weaknesses, which can be greatly enhanced by highlighting the writing style or refreshingness. I used to write about ancient Chinese proverbs, and readers reported that I dug too many holes and made a lot of riddles. Basically, it is a common problem in writing ancient novels. The writing is easy to be vague and has a more subtle beauty. In terms of fictional history, I don't know much about it, so I can only provide some small opinions, but the big ideas should prevail.

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Wow, the sense of immersion is very strong, but I don't understand it very well. It may be a historical subject. I haven't touched history for three years and I don't know much about the Warring States Period. I would like to make a small comment. You can introduce the world view at the beginning. For example, there are several countries in the history books. There are Qi, Chu, Yan, Han, Zhao, Wei, and Qin, known as the Seven Heroes of the Warring States Period. I don't know if it is fictional history or based on historical events. If imaginary history is relatively easy to write, and the male protagonist pretends to slap in the face, well, it's Qin Shihuang's dialogue. The writing style of Dada is more historical. It is difficult for me to describe it. It is relatively concise. The disadvantage is that it lacks a bit of modern charm. In fact, I think writing history does not need to be so serious. It is more fun to be a little funny (only my personal opinion. If there is any conflict, the opinion of Dada shall prevail)

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