Zichuan

It's been ten years, and looking back at the three XYZ books from that year is full of vicissitudes of life. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to find such soul-stirring works in the online literature world. They are the pioneers in the nascent era of online novels. Most of them do not care about profit, but to show the world in their minds - grand structures or momentary whims. For them, writing a book is not the same as coding, and they can sharpen their sword for ten years in order to pursue it. Nowadays, the enthusiastic generation has disappeared, and the level of writing that has not yet been completed is no longer what it used to be. The new generation is a commercial writer, and the occasional masterpieces don't have that kind of charm. It's like the original group of people were knights who wanted to take revenge, but now they are just policemen collecting bounties. The hero retired from the world, leaving behind the fascinating legend and the ageless image of the past. Those who have not yet finished writing are the heroes who are in their twilight years - I am talking about Misty Jiangnan. Personally, I think XYZ's x "Blasphemy" is better than the current "Eternal Night King". The environment has changed, and the original people have dispersed. Now, it's another time.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​… I couldn't sleep in a clear mind, so I got out of bed, tiptoed past my classmates who were sleeping soundly in the dormitory, and went to the small balcony nervously with a flashlight. After taking off my glasses, my vision was greatly reduced, and the street lights outside the window turned into hazy mist. Everything was quiet, and I leaned against the cabinet, thinking about the vivid faces of those people, gradually matured under the polish of time and battlefields, thinking about the white hair like frost and snow, thinking about "flowers are in spring, people are young", thinking about meteors falling, iron blood cold, Thinking of the heroic souls buried in the Holy Spirit Temple under the solemn pines and cypresses, thinking of A Xiu alone enduring the second half of his life when his two best brothers turned into loess, recalling the youth on the cold golden throne until his hair turned gray; thinking of... As I thought about it, a smart and cunning young man gradually appeared in front of me. Through the hazy tears, I seemed to see him - Zi Chuanxiu, the first bright emperor to rule the Xichuan Continent in a thousand years. Why was there such an "outstanding" emperor who was so greedy for money and lustful and loved to read pornographic magazines, peek at beautiful women changing clothes, blackmail and fight, and never did anything serious? I laughed, tears streaming down my face: Fate gave Zi Chuanxiu countless victims, but also gave him countless opportunities. He was like a firefighter who specializes in saving the scene. He would go wherever he was made into a mess: famous generals died tragically, and the murderer was at large. He walked thousands of miles alone, deep into the enemy's territory. Killing the enemy chieftain; the Far East fell and the family left it alone, so he restored the Far East for the family; the commander of the Black Flag Army, Fang Jin, died in battle, and the army lost troops and generals, so he took office in the southwest. Liu Feng Shuang was captured in an accident, and he extended a helping hand in the desperate situation; the Crusaders invaded the northwest with great fanfare, It was he who led the army to occupy Princess Fengshuang on the bank of the Langcang River (the power of love is great); the demons broke through and invaded in large numbers, and the survival of the country depended on it. He and Sterling resisted hard in Bataan, reversed the tide of the war, and defeated the 400,000 demon army like a lost dog; when the demons were punished, When he was on the verge of death, he had no choice but to become the Demon God Emperor, taking over a mess of endless wars and ruined people's livelihood; not to mention the renewed war in the mother country, Zichuan Ning irresponsibly threw a huge Zichuan to him; Perhaps when future generations rack their brains to study the character of the Emperor of Light and analyze his step-by-step rise, they will come to the conclusion that he was a careerist with patience and keen political insight beyond ordinary people. Yes, how can normal people put their thoughts on the country bumpkins from the Far East - the stupid, tough, simple-minded orcs; the timid and cowardly snake tribe with the head and rat at both ends; the unruly, gloomy and irritable dragon tribe, none of them are worth it. They are not vegetarians, but Emperor Guangming controls them obediently. What a profound scheming and outstanding leadership ability he must have. The Xiuzi Camp he single-handedly formed, this bloody and terrifying armed force Liang was originally a reservist composed of a group of street gangsters with corrupt military discipline and low quality - but the Emperor of Light transformed them into the most feared ace army on the continent. It is really puzzling. Either his method of training the army is the same as that of Di Lin, or the soldiers have been replaced with robot limbs and high-chip electronically integrated brains; yes, isn't it said that the Emperor of Light is the descendant of the defense department? Maybe he used the power of ancient civilization to arm his army... So historians are eager to dig into the ground to find the ancient civilization's classics to explain the undefeated myth of the Emperor of Light. In fact, the truth is very simple. Zi Chuanxiu is a human being who is not much different from ordinary people except for his life experience. He has reached the top of the admiration of thousands of people because he has suffered hardships and challenges that are unmatched by thousands of people. Heroes are ordinary people who suffer and do not admit defeat. So he told Yunlin that Yunlin's father did not want him to become a hero, but wanted him to become a healthy and independent ordinary person. Because the price of a hero is unimaginable: Sterling died unjustly, and the love he had buried for a lifetime was not realized; Di Lin was ruined (not counting Zi Chuanxiu's later words of vindication for him against all the opinions), and was harmed by Xiao Chuan; Zi Chuanxiu Ending up alone, feeling cold at high places; "The time of a young man is like a string of crystal bubbles teetering on the edge of collapse." Di Lin said that he could kill everyone in the world without caring, but he would never touch a single hair of theirs. Therefore, this inspector general, who is known for his cruelty and ruthlessness, stabbed his brothers again and again, even risking their lives to save them... Lin Xiujia expressed her slight dissatisfaction, but he was scolded by him who never said harsh words to his wife, so she knew how sacred the world in her husband's heart was; the beliefs and life trajectories of the three heroes of Zichuan were different. He came to repay the Far East for supporting him when he was down and out, and fought for that land, and in the end, he was willing to become a guardian to protect human civilization; Sterling was loyal to the Zichuan family without hesitation; Dilin was unwilling to be ordered by others and vowed to trample everyone under his feet; it can be said that they are completely different, but they treat each other with sincerity, cherish these friendships from the deepest part of their hearts, and their hearts that will not change until death are the same. The last words Zichuan Xiu muttered in front of the two brothers were like a sour juice pouring into the throat: Zichuan Xiu smiled. But tears slowly overflowed from the eyes of the young Zichuan family leader, blurring his eyes. In the haze, two heroic men among the pines and cypresses were smiling at him. "Eldest brother, second brother, if you can live, then I would rather not be the commander-in-chief. I would rather not be the president. Not even the King of Light or the commander of the Far East. The three of us are hooligans on the streets of the imperial capital, eating, drinking and having fun. It would be great to hide and seek with the governor and fool around in the military academy. "Second brother, today is your birthday, I wish you a happy birthday! I'll come see you again on my eldest brother's birthday. With big brother accompanying you, you are no longer lonely, right? You two must have sneaked away to drink at Bawang Bar where you can drink for free? There should be many beautiful girls in heaven, right? It's really unloyal. You all went over there, but you left me here alone... Left here alone..." After wiping away his tears and offering incense to both Sterling and Dilin, Zichuan Xiu bowed deeply and turned to leave. At this time, Zi Chuanxiu was not the invincible god of war worshiped by future generations, nor the emperor of light respected by all people, but a young man who had lost his closest brother and sat alone on the supreme throne for the rest of his life. He had already suffered from years of war and intrigue. Tired of the political struggle, his heart was broken along the way. The complete departure of his boyhood was like a string of crystal bubbles teetering on the edge. He was in the empire, covered in medals and with frosty hair. His ending is indeed "bright", but the blood, tears and pain in this process cannot be compensated by time; the memory, along with the pain that pierces the heart and lungs, will accompany him throughout his military life. Every morning when he wakes up, he truly feels that those people are really gone, even if there is no one in the world but the emperor, and no one on the shore of the land is the emperor; even if they are as beautiful as flowers, Princess Liufeng and His Highness Ning both got married (this is the greatest misfortune, right?); Even if the country's power is booming and human civilization is advancing by leaps and bounds; even if a unified, happy, peaceful, and powerful empire is his vision, it can never make up for his pain. I have always wondered whether Sterling's separation from Gopp before his death meant that he no longer believed in Dilin. Why didn't Dilin just bring him here after he ordered Gopp to capture him? After meeting him, everything was easy, right? It was Dilin's impatience and desire for power that he wanted to firmly control the expeditionary force, which made him overestimate Gopp's ability and underestimate Sterling's will, thinking that his brother would speak well when he came forward; Trin did not die from Gop's ignorance, but from the collision of his and Di Lin's different ideas, and neither one gave in; so I think Sterling still regards Di Lin as his elder brother and cherishes the friendship, but even if he is as close as a brother, he is not allowed to change his determined will. Proud and unyielding, Sterling is worthy of being the greatest warrior in the golden age, and his heart is stronger than his armor. "Rebellious officials and traitors are sworn in! " The bright long sword was unsheathed, illuminating people's eyes, and the overwhelming murderous aura was approaching. Sterling's majestic figure was like a god descending from the earth. The white light flashed in the dark night, and the long sword struck like thunder. A storm of arrows poured towards the man again. The powerful crossbow arrows penetrated his warm body and hit the tree trunk behind him with spurting blood. In the darkness, the figure shook a few times. But he finally stood firm, shaky. The blood splashed into the snow drop by drop, and the strength disappeared from his body little by little. Now, Sterling could no longer even hold the sword in his hand. Wow, so tired, so tired. After so many years of fighting from south to north, he was exhausted from the bottom of his heart to his body. "I'm so tired, I really want to have a good rest..." Later generations' evaluation of Sterling was exactly what he said: "Since ancient times, famous generals are like beauties, who will never let the world grow old. "Sterling is the image of a tragic hero from the inside out. His huge emotional regrets and tragic ending are in sharp contrast to his illustrious military exploits, integrity and noble personality. The old pig used the fall of a superstar to symbolize his death, which is extremely insightful and summarized. I was puzzled at first, just like watching Sirius in Harry Potter. Like death, I feel that the author did it deliberately to make people cry, but Sirius's detached character and indifferent mood made this accident that could have been avoided become inevitable: who can be so unscrupulous at the moment of life and death? It would be strange if he didn't die. This is a character caused mainly by Sirius himself. Tragedy (the main reason is because, like Dumbledore, Harry also bears some responsibility); similarly, Sterling's death seems accidental and can be completely avoided - if Gop is smarter and does not carry out the arrest mechanically, but invites Sterling to see Dilin; if Dilin puts down his desire for power a little, instead of giving Brother Pu issued an order to capture Sterling alive, but first "pretend" to be in danger and let Gop lead him to "rescue"; if Sterling had been more wary or ambitious, less cautious, and directly led the expedition into the imperial capital - then he would not have died, and this tragedy could have been completely avoided. However, after reading the above three ifs, you will find that these ifs are impossible: It is impossible for Gepu to disobey Di Lin's orders at all, but he is Di Lin's number one subordinate. He is loyal to Di Lin and does not allow any signs of harming his master. To the extent that he cannot complete the order, he would rather be punished by his master. We must ensure the absolute safety of Dilin, and invite Sterling to see Dilin without disarming him. If Sterling and Dilin are at odds and accidentally hurt his master, Gop will never dare or be willing to take that risk; And Dilin has to deal with Sanxing The Imperial Guards who usurped the throne only had 10,000 or 20,000 troops, while Duck City held hundreds of thousands of expeditionary troops. Sterling would definitely fall out with Dilin after receiving the order from Shenxing. If Sterling had discovered any clues before seeing him, he would have been doomed. , Dilin's desire for power is innate and deeply rooted in his bones. He does not allow any factors that may lead to failure to appear. To be on the safe side, Sterling must be captured alive and then control the expeditionary force; And Sterling received the letter for help. As an important member of the family, if he rashly led a hundred thousand troops into the imperial capital to rescue Di Lin, it would be strange if he was not regarded as a rebel. In addition, his belief in loyalty to the family has been deeply rooted in his bones. Even if Di Lin is captured by San Xing, Sterling will not break up with San Xing in person. He would rather rescue Di Lin alone, so he broke away from the protection of the army and went to the rescue with Wu Bin's weak force; All possible turning points have been denied. This is an inevitable event, determined by the personalities of the participants. Sterling's death is a typical "hero's death". It seems like a bolt from the blue, but it is actually destined. The tragedy of the character combines with the romanticism of the hero's personality, so after reading the plot, I suddenly felt like a heavy punch to the chest, blood clogged the throat, and it took a long time to recover. In Zichuan Three Heroes. Among them, Sterling can be said to be the most passive one. He spent his whole life worrying about responsibilities and the wishes of others. From marriage to career, he failed to make choices according to his own will. He was manipulated by others and got engaged to Li Qing in a confused way. He was sent to attack the demons, ruining his and Cardin's happiness. He was tired of the war career, but could not get rid of it. Until his death, he still died of being loyal to his family's ideological beliefs. Sterling has not lived a good life for himself. I really want to know what kind of family Sterling was born into, and how he spent his childhood? Is he similar to Lin He, a child of an abandoned clan, living a hard life with his mother in the countryside? Or is he similar to Di Lin, living in a declining famous family, enduring the looks of his relatives? It feels to me that Sterling's seriousness and righteousness are like those born after Zhonglie or His family background is scholarly, and his integrity and moral values also show that his family's ideological education level is quite high. Being born in this type of family, people are easily instilled with the concept of collective being greater than the individual and self-sacrifice. It seems that Sterling has received a lot of education in this aspect. This also led to the way he chose to live and even die in the future - complete dedication. Di Lin is really pure, but the aggregation of contradictions is like a rhinestone with full edges and corners. To put it simply, he is a person who strives to the extreme no matter what he does: he cherishes his brothers, even if they are destroyed in ashes, he will never give up; he pursues power, even if he steps on mountains of corpses and seas of blood, he must achieve his goals. ; Lao Zhu used Lin Bing's words to say that he is "full of evil and unparalleled achievements", which is actually an analysis of his personality: Whether he does good things or bad things, Di Lin will do things that no one has done before or after. How can anyone be embarrassed? As for the ending of his death at Ma Wei's hands, I wasn't too shocked after watching it. Maybe it was because I knew a little bit from the spoilers before, and Lao Zhu started to lay out clues about Ma Wei. When Zichuan Xiu and Di Lin slaughtered Golin, I had a vague hunch that Ma Wei would never be over so easily. Two of the three heroes finally joined forces to do something bad (they did it separately) There are a lot of people, let's unite this time), how can we not suffer some retribution in the future? It may be that Di Lin's death is a tragedy of fate, not as explosive as the tragedy of character. Tragedy happens little by little, like gradually sliding into the abyss. Compared with the sap-like blow caused by tragedy of character, tragedy of fate makes people feel long-lasting, sad and powerful.

These last few paragraphs simply elevate this novel to unattainable heights

Zichuan is considered an excellent online novel. It took me nearly a week to read it, but I thought about it for several days. However, after careful review, I also found some problems. I am not happy to complain, so I will discuss the problems of Zichuan Yishu here. Question 1, about Zi Chuan Ning and Liu Feng Shuang. This may be the most controversial issue in the comment area. Many book friends are arguing enthusiastically, so I will start with this to take advantage of the popularity. Let me first mention that not only Zi Chuan Ning but also Liu Feng Shuang also has some problems, so let's talk about them together here. 1. In the early stage, the protagonist Zi Chuanxiu's attitude towards Zi Chuan Ning was indeed problematic. He kept rejecting it and even pushed it out. This was also one of the reasons for Zi Chuan Ning's "change of heart". Some book friends said that before A Xiu went to assassinate the demons, he asked Sterning to tell him "I love you", so Zichuan Ning should not change his heart. However, how sincere is it to ask others to repeat even these three words? This isn't even a problem. The real question is, if you haven't confessed your love for so long, what do you mean by confessing your love before risking your life? Kidnap her emotionally and make her wait for someone whose life or death is uncertain? How much youth can girls waste? Shouldn't the normal logic be that if you usually express your feelings, before risking your life, you should consider persuading the other person not to wait for you? Even if there is the influence of Zichuan Yuanxing, we should refuse more firmly before risking our lives, so that Aning can seize the opportunity of his youth! So there should be something wrong with what Lao Zhu wrote here, and he shouldn't have written it like this! 2. There is also a problem with Zichuan Ning's change of heart. It's not that he shouldn't have changed his mind, but that he changed his mind too quickly. For two years, it is normal for lovers who are not very deep in love in reality, but from the perspective of the later chapters, Zichuanning's feelings for Zichuanxiu are very deep, which is unreasonable. During this period, it should go through three stages. In the early stage (about half a year to a year), people are hopeful and vigorously inquire and pay attention to and even search for information about Axiu. In the middle stage (about half a year to a year), they gradually become disappointed, confused and overwhelmed. In the later stage, they are desperate and sad, and gradually accept the so-called "facts". In total, it should be roughly in the third stage in two years. Taking into account Ma Wei's character in the following article, pleasing Zichuan Ning should rely on appearances such as sweet words, rather than sincere devotion like Yun Qianxue did to Kadan. Therefore, even if Zichuan Ning can open up his guard, it should be very preliminary, maybe just talking and laughing, and it is far from a clear relationship as close as holding hands in the boudoir. Considering that he was assassinated a few days ago, Axiu's protection brought back Zichuan Ning's long-lasting memory, so in Ma Wei's comfort conversations these days, he should have acted unnaturally and showed strangeness from time to time, let alone being so intimate and natural! 3. In the Southwest Mawei incident, Zichuan Ning's attitude was even more outrageous! What kind of person is A Xiu? You, Zi Chuan Ning, still don't know? Do you actually suspect him of avenging private revenge? Later, she explained that she actually believed in Axiu and was just interceding for Ma Wei, which was even more outrageous! Even if you ask for mercy, I don't know how to put it in another way. If you use jealousy as a reason, isn't that just hurting Axiu's heart? Aren't you trying your best to make up for the emotional rift at this time? Is it possible that Ma Wei is more important than A Xiu? 4. In the plot at the back of the book, Zichuanning's affection and trust for Axiu are very deep. For example, when she was fleeing, Li Qing suggested that she go find Minghui, but Zichuan Ning said that she no longer wanted to think about rebuilding the Zichuan family, and she would be satisfied just to see Axiu. After arriving in the Far East, Zichuan Ning didn't want to force Axiu to help her get revenge. Li Qing persuaded her, but she refused, saying that Axiu would do it naturally if she wanted to, and she couldn't force it if she didn't want to. Therefore, Zichuan Ning was just traveling in the Far East and persuading Axiu's men, which was also done by Li Qing and Lin Bing. Zichuan Ning was not mentioned in the book. Some book friends said that Zichuanning should not ignore Axiu's feelings and secretly seek revenge on Dilin. You must know that Zichuanning is a person after all, an independent person. Having deep feelings for Axiu does not mean that he has to obey Axiu in everything. Dilin has a great hatred for her, so why not use some tricks to get revenge? If your behavior is determined by the other person's feelings in everything, wouldn't this kind of love be cheap? This should be caused by the protagonist mentality of book friends, thinking that the only one who revolves around the male protagonist is the female protagonist. Some book friends said that Zichuanning did not understand Axiu's true thoughts on the Far East issue, which was really unfair. You know, when Axiu first started the uprising in the Far East, his original idea was to use the Far East as a bargaining chip to return to the Zichuan family. The subsequent change in his thinking was due to the series of experiences in the Far East. Zichuanning has not experienced it personally and cannot understand his feelings. He still thinks about the problem according to the ideas of the Axiu he first met. Naturally, there will be differences. Even if this matter is left to Liu Fengshuang, I am afraid he will be wrong because it is Axiu who has changed. In addition, to clarify another rumor, Zichuan Ning did not distrust Axiu and believed that Axiu had defected to the enemy. At the leadership meeting, it was decided that A Xiu should defect to the enemy. Among the three people who believed that A Xiu had not defected to the enemy, Zi Chuan Ning was among them! After bumping into Ma Wei, Zichuan Ning's cry to Sterling also meant that she thought Axiu was dead. 5. Liu Feng Shuang's problem mainly lies in the two encounters with A Xiu, which are not very reasonable. For the first time, you, a pillar of the country, why would you go to the capital of an enemy country if you have nothing to do? The assassination of Zichuanning was probably an impromptu idea after her uncle died. Even if assassinating Zichuanning was the original goal, it is not worth the risk for you, the only pillar of the country. To be honest, I really can't think of any reason for Liu Fengshuang to appear in the Zichuan Imperial Capital. Similarly, it is not very reasonable for Liu Feng Shuang to go to Heqiu for the second time. Princess Shuang should not be the kind of person who just gives up her choice casually. Even if she does not think about the Liu Feng family, she still has to think about the hundreds of thousands of comrades in the army! Maybe she feels that she is too tired after holding on for so long, and may no longer care about Liu Fengsen, but as a loving and righteous Shuangdian, can we abandon our brothers? My opinion: Regarding the plot of Zichuan Ning, it is indeed quite awkward. I feel that the author himself has not figured out how to write it and keeps jumping around. When I read the relationship between Axiu and Zichuan Ning, I thought it would be better to break it off like Linghu Chong and Yue Lingshan did. After reading to the end, I thought it was okay to end it. Firstly, it was necessary for the plot and for the sake of peace on the entire continent. Secondly, Zichuanning's feelings for Axiu were indeed very deep, and Axiu could not completely let go of that relationship. This was still different from Linghu Chong's situation. Regarding the plot of Liu Fengshuang, there is indeed no solution. The so-called coincidence does not make a book, although it is not reasonable, but it can only be arranged in this way, otherwise the protagonist and Liu Fengshuang will not meet at all, and the plot will not unfold! Question two, about the Black Sand Military Advisor. This is also a major issue that is hotly debated among book friends. 1. Who is the Black Sand Military Advisor? Judging from various clues in the book, the author's original intention should be Lin Rui. First of all, Heisha should be a member of the Lin clan, a descendant of the Blood Eye clan. This is not difficult to determine. There is a lot of evidence: (1) Heisha's encounter and conversation with Axiu in the Far East; (2) If Heisha was an ordinary human, it would be impossible to gain the trust of the Demon God Emperor. Only the Blood Eye Clan, who are also members of the Demon Royal Family, could; (3) When Buck fought, the Demon God The God Emperor is so anxious to find Heisha, and it seems that Heisha is the hope of victory. The narrator of the article also says so. Combined with the later article, it is said that Heqiu suddenly gathered an army of 300,000 people with unknown intentions. So this hope of victory is probably the support of the Heqiu Lin family! But the problem is, even if Heisha is from the Lin family, it is not necessarily Lin Rui. Heisha is Lin Rui, and there are actually several clues: (1) The Lin family has been integrated into the human world for thousands of years, but he may not necessarily support the demons. Since Heisha dares to guarantee Lin's support to the Demon God Emperor, he must have control of the Lin family (the purge of the military's young faction is mostly to get rid of opponents). (2) Why is Ma Wei behind Heqiu? He is a great human traitor who has fornicated with the demon clan. To take him in is to risk the disapproval of the world! And because of the Japanese pirates problem, Ma Wei had already become enemies with the Lin family! Combined with the fact that Ma Wei went to look for Heisha's strategist during the Battle of Buck, he probably found him, but the battle was over and Heisha had no choice but to take Ma Wei to the river hill. But if Heisha's status in the Lin family is low, you, a loser in planning, are unlikely to let the Lin family accept Ma Wei. The biggest difficulty is Lin Rui, because it was Lin Rui who helped Axiu kill Ma Wei at that time, unless Heisha is Lin Rui himself! But, if Heisha is Lin Rui, there will be many problems. For example, many book friends have pointed out that the time between the two does not completely match up. I didn't check it carefully, but one thing is clear: the Demon Castle is located in the eastern part of the Demon Kingdom, and the Lin family is located in the southwest of the Zichuan family. Basically, it can be said that the two are located in the easternmost and westernmost parts of the continent. The one-way journey takes at least one or two months. It is impossible for Heisha to control the Lin family while constantly wandering around the Demon Castle! Although the book says that Heisha often disappears for a period of time, it is also said that he expresses his opinions on various kingdom issues, which shows that he also spends a lot of time in the Demon Castle. 2. Why did Heisha gain such deep trust from the Demon God Emperor? Not to mention that he is just a descendant of the Blood Eye Clan who is living abroad. He is not completely sure about his stance on humans and demons. It is impossible for him to side with the demons or the local demon royal family! The struggle between the demon royal family is also quite fierce! What's more, the Bright Empire established by the Lin family was destroyed three hundred years ago due to the invasion of demons! Therefore, the grievances and interests between the Lin family and the demons are not simple! Therefore, the Demon God Emperor trusts Heisha so much that he even lets him interfere in the internal affairs of the Demon Clan without any precautions, which is also a big problem! My point of view: Whether Heisha is Lin Rui or not, there are always problems, and the Demon God Emperor's trust is even more problematic. The Demon God Emperor and Heisha may work together on the issue of demon invasion, but they should not be so trusting in the internal affairs of the demons and other issues. Question three, about the background setting of this book. The background setting of this book is quite confusing. The basic setting of this book is an era of restarting civilization after the destruction of civilization due to large-scale nuclear war. But the specific stage of civilization is very confusing. Institutions, culture, technology and other aspects are basically a hodgepodge of various things. This is very bad. It is best to clarify the stage of civilization. Moreover, various strange words appeared in the early stage. Some book friends said that this is nonsense, but I think it is just nonsense and not nonsense. Xingye's nonsense, apart from being funny, does not have much sense of violation. The most obvious thing is that every time A Xiu says something strange, others have to ignore it and say it is an intrusion. If it were Master Xing's nonsense, there would be no need to deliberately tell others to ignore it. The plot can continue on! My opinion: The background setting is confusing, which greatly lowers the standard of this book! Question 4, about war and logistics. The description of war in this book is quite wonderful and there are no big problems. The problem is that in a cold-weapon society, it is simply impossible to support a war involving millions of people. In ancient history books, there are often reports of hundreds of thousands or even nearly a million troops, but in fact, these figures are exaggerated. Even if they are true, they also include the number of logistics civilians. Generally speaking, the number of logistics civilians is more than twice that of formal combatants. In the book, the number of formal combatants is often hundreds of thousands or even millions, which is not reasonable. Moreover, in the later period of the book, large-scale wars continued, and the logistics capabilities of the cold weapon era simply could not bear it. Generally speaking, excluding the people eating horses and chewing on the way back and forth for the transport team, only one-third or even lower (depending on the distance) actually reaches the army. You can imagine how big the logistical pressure is. In fact, the author also knows this. For example, during the expedition against the demons, he said that only about one-fifth of the food and grass reached the army. But for the sake of plot development, the author had to avoid this problem as much as possible. Question five, about the demons and the Lin clan. According to the setting, the ordinary demons are a race specially created at the end of the last civilization to deal with the "barbarians", while the demon royal family are transformed and more powerful humans, called defenders. The Lin clan are descendants of one of the branches, the Blood Eye clan. 1. Since the demon royal family also belongs to humans, they should not be so cruel to human civilization. Those who clearly know that they are descendants of the defenders include the Meng family and the Ka family. As for the other royal families, it stands to reason that even if they don't know, they would still have some guesses. After all, the Blood Eye family can fully integrate into humans! Then when the demons invade, they shouldn't massacre humans. After all, humans are their true kin. Of course, given the tradition of plundering by demons to support war, plundering is inevitable, but the royal family should have some restraints. It is okay to plunder, but the massacre must be reduced. Even if you don't know that you are human, with the wisdom of the royal family, you should be able to see that human civilization is more advanced, and conquering and utilizing human civilization has more benefits than destroying it. What's also outrageous is that such an important matter as the origin of the Demon Royal Family is only recorded in the "Divine Code", and only the Demon God Emperor can read it. This is actually unreasonable. 2. The struggle for imperial power evolved into a tribal life and death battle, which is actually unreasonable. For one thing, this was a huge blow to the strength of the entire demon clan. Secondly, this will cause the competition for imperial power to be too fierce, which is not good for either the winner or the loser. You must know that ordinary demons and demon royals are completely different. Ordinary demons pose no threat to the imperial power at all. Once the opponent is forced to a dead end and the opponent fights to the death, even if he wins, his vitality will be greatly damaged and other tribes will covet him. In this way, the battle for imperial power will evolve into an endless battle. 3. Even the Lin family knows that eggs cannot be put in one basket, why don't the demon royal family send some branches to develop into human society? The Meng family and the Ka family know their human identities, so at least these two royal families should take action. The demon royal family has more powerful genes than ordinary humans. If a blood-eyed family enters human society, they can establish a powerful empire of light. Even if other royal families don't know their human identities, don't they have any ideas when they see the achievements of the blood-eyed family? Moreover, by sending branches to develop in human society, once they achieve success, they will also assist in the invasion and the establishment of rule after the invasion! You must know that the genes of the demon royal family are better than those of ordinary humans, and the chance of achieving success is very high. 4. As descendants of the Blood Eye Clan, the Lin family is different from ordinary humans. Why haven't they been found to be special for so long? Apart from anything else, the pregnancy period alone is a big flaw. The book does not say that only "pure royals" will have greatly extended pregnancy periods. And generally the pregnancy period depends on the development of the fetus. Sterling and Cardin's son is not a pure royal family, so wouldn't the pregnancy period be greatly extended? 5. Intermarriage among the demon royal family is extremely frequent, and genes have long been mixed. So how does the artificial intelligence of the Montessori Holy Land identify which branch of the defender the incoming person is? Zichuan is indeed a very classic online novel, but among the "internet classics", Zichuan has more problems, at least among the classic online novels I have read, Zichuan has the most problems. Don't use earlier works as an excuse. I have also read earlier online works, such as Zhu Xian, Zhibeiyou, and Buddha is the Way. None of them have as many obvious problems as Zichuan. The above five problems are the more obvious and important ones that I have discovered so far. There are also many detailed loopholes, which are not listed here. Some of these problems are unavoidable, such as Axiu's encounter with Liu Fengshuang and war logistics. Although there are some unreasonable things, they cannot be corrected. After all, the plot requires it. Some problems can actually be avoided or corrected, such as the problems with Zichuan Ning and Heisha Military Advisor, and the background settings. According to old book friends, this book has been changed and the starting point is not the earliest original version. In this case, you might as well revise it again and try to correct these problems!

Some people may be surprised that Zichuan's writing is actually called good writing? Maybe only a bookworm like me, who has read thousands of books, can discover the strength of the author's writing. It doesn't have to be gorgeous words like Mao Ni and The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow to be called good writing. The ultimate level of returning to nature after being extremely gorgeous is the true level. Its nonsensicalness and nonsense are not really nonsense. This is a very strong control of words. The relaxed and humorous nonsense is so well integrated with the passionate and epic work. It does not destroy the atmosphere at all, does not destroy the character creation at all, and does not affect the advancement of the plot at all. The passionate and touching plot can also make readers quickly enter the drama and empathize. You can carefully read how superb this writing ability is. And I don't know if you have noticed it. Putting aside the nonsensical plot and dialogue, Zichuan's writing is very clean, and the plot is extremely concise. There is really no burden or redundancy. In order to portray characters or exaggerate the atmosphere, many authors tend to use a lot of descriptions. They describe the environment in large paragraphs, and each sentence contains an action detail. However, the descriptions in Zichuan are mostly sparse. When the key plot comes, there is a lot of opening and closing, and there is very little foreshadowing when describing the relationship between men and women. The direct expression is not obtrusive. The impassioned lyrical text is also sparse with words, but it also makes people feel goosebumps all over the body. (You must know that the whole novel is still nonsensical, and it can actually achieve this effect in inducing readers' emotions) I have only read 15% of the novel so far. It is a very good novel.

Finished reading. The descriptions of battle scenes and military struggles are very good, making people feel as if the author has experienced them. Overall, I think it's a good piece of work. But I think there are also disadvantages. This novel has two heroines, and neither heroine is focused on. This is something I regret, especially Liu Fengshuang. I believe most fans prefer her to be the heroine, but her appearance is really late, and the ending is a bit hasty. The final arrangement of the kingdom was not explained properly, there was no detail on whether the Far East became prosperous, and the final meeting between Liu Fengshuang and Zichuan Xiu was not written. Let's also talk about Zichuan Ning. Her character seemed okay from the front, but since she was suspected of defecting to the Zichuanxiu Demon Clan, everything she did later made people feel less likeable. First of all, the family suspected Zichuan of defecting to the demon clan, and she also became suspicious. She never thought about how her uncle Zichuan Shenxing and the Zichuan family treated Zichuan Xiu, and then they suspected that Zichuan Xiu had hooked up with Ma Wei soon after he defected (here, if you have not read the full text, everyone feels that it is understandable, after all, no one will be widowed for a traitor). Two, Zi Chuanxiu came back from the Far East and bumped into her and Ma Wei making love. The book said that she immediately understood that she loved Zi Chuanxiu and had broken off contact with Ma Wei. Then Zichuanxiu alienated her because of her sadness. At first she admitted her mistake and apologized, but in the end when she saw that Zichuanxiu didn't reconcile with her, she actually got angry and accepted it. 3. Let Zichuan Shenxing deprive Zichuan Xiu of control over the Far East and prevent him from returning to the Far East. The explanation she gave was that the Far East was too chaotic and she was afraid that Zi Chuanxiu would lose her life in the Far East. It can be seen from this that Zichuan Ning does not understand what Zichuan Xiu really cares about. Four, Zichuanxiu was assassinated by Ma Wei in the southwest, when Zichuanxiu wiped out Ma Wei's gang members. Zichuanning did not choose to believe Zichuanxiu, thinking that he was jealous that Ma Wei had had a relationship with her. Here, she didn't care about Zichuanxiu's assassination, and openly opposed him, asking the Zichuan family to put pressure on him. In the end, Zichuanxiu was imprisoned because of this, and she did not save him. Five, premeditated assassination of Di Lin. (After the Ma Wei incident, Zi Chuanxiu saved the Zi Chuan family several times. The book describes how deep Zi Chuan Ning's love for Zi Chuan Xiu was.) From the emperor's point of view, assassinating Di Lin is actually common sense. The master is so powerful that it shocks the master, not to mention the terrifying guy Di Lin. This matter was decided by Zichuan Ning and Zichuan Shenxing together. (No matter what is right or wrong in this matter, after all, from her point of view, it seems that it is not incomprehensible to want Di Lin to die). . . . . . After the assassination failed, Di Lin besieged the Governor's Mansion. She and Zichuan Shenxing actually shamelessly said that Di Lin was a traitor. She wanted to kill others first, but she didn't allow others to rebel against you? Maybe these are the pressure of feudal emperors. In the end, Zi Chuan Ning fled to the Far East. After seeing Zi Chuan Xiu, he fully accused Di Lin of his "crimes", completely unaware that they themselves had forced Di Lin to rebel. Seeing Zichuan Xiu's hair turning gray overnight, she first thought that he was so sad because of Zichuan Sanxing's death (well, she didn't even know what Zichuan Sanxing did to Zichuan Xiu?). Then she thought that Zi Chuanxiu could send troops to restore her country and avenge her. She never thought that Zi Chuanxiu and Di Lin were brothers. Was he really happy to let Zi Chuanxiu go to fight Di Lin? He also connived at his subordinates to put pressure on Zi Chuanxiu. In the end, Zi Chuanxiu sent troops to attack Di Lin. Here, Teslin's wife Li Qing is also a talented person. She says how much she loves Teslin, but she doesn't understand him at all. Teslin would not be happy to see his two former brothers fighting each other. 6. After Di Lin's defeat, Zi Chuan Ning and Lin Qing secretly sent troops to hunt down Di Lin, regardless of Zi Chuan Xiu's feelings. Di Lin's final death must have been partly due to her. Her pursuit must have weakened Di Lin's defensive strength, allowing Ma Wei to take advantage of it. Maybe Zichuan Ning passed the news to Ma Wei and asked him to kill someone with a borrowed knife. There is another situation where Di Lin was killed by Zi Chuan Ning and the others. After all, when Zi Chuan Xiu was at the height of his power, a shrewd person like Ma Wei would take the initiative to do such a stupid thing that would definitely lead to violent revenge. General Manager: Zichuan Ning, as the heir of the family, I will not discuss her intention to kill Di Lin. As an emperor, there is nothing wrong with her. However, she has received so much kindness from Zichuan Xiu, and she also clearly knows Zichuan Shenxing's attitude towards Zichuan Xiu. She has never put herself in Zichuanxiu's shoes. She will only cry and pretend to be pitiful and let Zichuanxiu protect her. She relies on Zichuanxiu's feelings for her and her family, and has been using him to consume him. In terms of her relationship with Zi Chuanxiu, she has always described how much she loves Zi Chuanxiu, but I don't think she understands Zi Chuanxiu at all, and she doesn't think much about Zi Chuanxiu. The last Zen position is a matter of opinion. Her surname is Zichuan and she has nothing in her hands, while Zichuanxiu has a lot of troops and the Liufeng family is also one of his people. It is impossible for Zichuan Ning to sit safely in the position of chief executive. She has no other choice but to give up her position. The Three Heroes Rebellion was started by Zichuan Ning and Zichuan Shenxing. Later, they made themselves look pitiful. They used Sterling's death to prompt Zichuan Xiu and Di Lin to go to war, but they did not explain the fact that she and Zichuan Shenxing conspired to kill Di Lin. Emotionally speaking, this incident hurt Zichuanxiu the most. She knew clearly that Zichuanxiu, Dilin, and Sterling were brothers, but she insisted on killing Dilin, causing antagonism between the three brothers. After being kicked out of the imperial capital by Di Lin, he pretended to be pitiful, instigated the brotherly relationship between Zi Chuanxiu and Di Lin, incited the soldiers' resentment against Di Lin in front of Zi Chuanxiu, publicized how evil Di Lin was, and emotionally abducted Zi Chuanxiu and Di Lin to start a war. So I really didn't like Zichuanning later on, and even disliked her. She was very green tea, and she pretended to be pitiful and affectionate every day. Pig's Foot is also very cruel. He knew clearly that Zi Chuan Ning was responsible for their brother's rebellion and their death. In the end, he didn't blame her at all. It was as if nothing had happened and he continued to be intimate with Zi Chuan Ning.

The more I look at Zichuan Ning, the more disgusting she becomes. She is a green tea bitch. In my eyes, I only have Lin He and not Zichuan Xiu. Why should the Zichuan family be worthy of the protagonist's allegiance?

Let me tell you my immature views. I watch it every summer. As time goes by, I like Dilin and Sterling more and more, but hate Zichuan Xiu. What is fate? Destiny is like a fly that never bites a seamless egg. The tragedy that Zichuan Xiu seems to be caused by his own hands. He never knows what he wants. Sometimes he seems to be happy with revenge, but sometimes he is indecisive. How many times can he avoid the tragedy of the three brothers? How many times does he push himself on this road with one hand? Maybe more. Every time he changes, he has his own mental journey and his own difficulties, so for his own difficulties, he can abandon everything, let go of everything, and fight against everything. The first estrangement between him and Di Lin. When I first watched it, I always sympathized with Zichuan Xiu, but later I felt that it was artificial. The left and right were just some people who were destined to have no way to survive. If they were killed, they would be killed. Is there anything worth feeling? And why should there be a gap between these people and his elder brother? Does Zichuan Xiu really have no ambition? I'm afraid not necessarily. His ambition is probably greater than anyone else. If it were really not for him, he would not risk participating in the battle for the kingship of the demon clan. Even if it was for Sterling, why would he rebel? Why did he surrender to the Zichuan family? Can he really defeat Di Lin? He knew that if he did this, one of the two people would definitely die, but he still did it without hesitation. What did he rely on? Doesn't it mean that Di Lin will never kill him? But he might not be able to kill Di Lin? This is Zi Chuanxiu's only chance of winning. His empire is achieved through love and friendship step by step sacrifice. He doesn't want to give up any of them, and in the end he will have to throw away everything. Zichuan Xiu was obviously the darling of fate, but he single-handedly pushed himself into the tragedy he thought he was. Zichuan Ning instigated Zichuan Ginseng to kill Di Lin. From that moment on, it was no longer possible for Zichuan Xiu and Zichuan Xiu. And Zichuanxiu shouldn't go to attack Di Lin. Zichuan Xiu, when he was the King of Light in the Far East, Boudin said that Zi Chuan Xiu was an unambitious person and was willing to build his ambition by himself. Zi Chuan Xiu obviously humbly returned to the Zi Chuan family. He was really forced to do so. I don't think so. He always had a choice to stand with his brothers, but he never had a choice. He actively or passively became the master of the Zi Chuan Empire. Maybe he handed the throne to Yun Lin in the end, but it didn't matter.

You all say it's a masterpiece, but I forced myself to read more than a dozen chapters and I really couldn't stand it. Each chapter jumps too much and the content is too nonsensical. What kind of car and what did the author want to do? It's so embarrassing.

I watched it once in junior high school and couldn't put it down. I watched it twice in high school and twice in college. I finished it today and read it five times. I read it word for word every time. I personally think this is the pinnacle of online literature. I can't see any flaws in the whole process. There are too many distinct characters. The more I read, the more I read it. Now some of the endings have been hinted in the previous article. I feel that the breakup of Xiu and Ning's relationship is the finishing touch. The rebellion of the three heroes is also handled very well. There is also Ma Wei, who killed Lord Di Lin in the end, which makes me particularly angry. But it is these plots that make me want to stop him. In junior high school, I liked Di Lin the most, he was cold, handsome and rational. In high school, I liked Zi Chuan Xiu's charming personality. I used to like Liu Feng Shuang, the perfect opposite sex, but now I find Zi Chuan Ning is the reality. Only by experiencing immaturity can you grow. Ge Ying I have too many books. I have read a lot of books, including online literature and world classics. The two that have the greatest impact on me are One Square World and the other Zichuan. The former is recognized by the world, and Zichuan is in the eye of the beholder. He deserves to be collected and read again and again. I love Zichuan so much. I dream of becoming someone like Zichuanxiu and hope to do something for future generations. So, work hard.