Immortal Doctor in Another World

Sitting here is too strong, and I wrote three books so fast. . If you could write less half of it every day and use the other half of the time to review the reading of the story more and revise it, I feel like it would have become platinum long ago.

The writing in the front is okay, but the back part is messy and messy, with inexplicable enemy upgrades, too many characters, no focus, and a confusing system.

I loved watching it back then and watched it no less than ten times. Unfortunately, it left many holes unfilled, which is a real pity. . .

I watched it again recently. I just finished it, and I have to say that I am still disappointed. The pits have not been filled in. It seems that Fang Yun's Baishi Divine Lotus has not been collected. I felt unhappy after watching it at first. Now I have watched it again, and it has aroused my resentment again, ahhhhhh! I really want to pull the author back and forth and shake him hundreds of times. I feel so uncomfortable. Can't I explain it clearly and finish it? Even if I update one or two extra chapters to give a rough explanation, I won't feel so uncomfortable... Wuwuwu😭😭😭😭

When I read this book, I was amazed and felt it was different. (Actually, it was because I had read too few books.) I was fascinated by it. It's just that the map was changed too quickly, and the power system was broken. The places that were still full of weaklings in the early stage became as strong as clouds in the later stage. The author still dug holes but did not fill them. He had promised to come back ten years later to treat the heart disease of the little girl, but he did not mention it again in the end. There is also the so-called observer and maker in God, which was not explained in the later period. In short, this work did give me a good reading experience at the time.

I don't remember when I started watching it, maybe seven or eight years ago. This book and Zhu Xian are masterpieces in my mind. Maybe it may change after reading it now, but the feeling of immortality has always been the closest to what I want in my heart.

Sigh~ I used to stay up all night reading this book. It was really good. Maybe I was young and experienced and didn't have so much fighting power, but I still enjoyed reading it. Although it's much worse now. But for me back then, it was as good as Douluo and Dou Po at that time! There are a few paragraphs at the back about fighting spirit and magic, which were really novel at the time! A cultivator actually incorporated fighting spirit magic. Anyway, I was very happy when I saw it!

I still remember that Fang Yun had a little girl who couldn't be saved. Anyway, there were still a lot of pitfalls.

This is the meaning of salary, hahaha, I'm back, fulfilling the dream of my youth 🤭

No one will remember Ye Lao, right?