Survive! It All Starts with a Dorm Room Swap

Although I also like Sister Yu, the writing is still a bit bad. I can't stand it as an old bookworm. The pace at the beginning is too slow and there are too many dialogues. If I change the dormitory and want to write about the antagonism between men and women, I will increase the hatred. What does it mean to go offline without saying a few words? There is also the male protagonist asking his roommate whether he believes that Yu can ward off disasters. The male protagonist must believe this when he asks. If you believe it, you don't hurry up and run away. The senior sister even mentioned it to you. It takes a dead person to react.

Ever since that silly character appeared at the end of Chapter 5, it's been like playing house

I read Chapter 20 but didn't read the rest. I felt that the plot of the first dungeon was too slow, but the subsequent progress was a bit too fast. It's just that in less than twenty chapters, three ghosts have joined the ghost realm. I feel that the protagonist drives the ghost so casually, and the combat power expands so fast. I'm a little curious if the author continues to develop at this speed and will be able to end the supernatural era in about one hundred chapters 🤭

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Damn, do you have straight hair or inward hair?

When I read Chapter 9, to be honest, the level was not good. The character of Chen Yang was created like a fussy NPC. In the first dungeon, maybe the author did not regard it as a dungeon. There was no atmosphere at all, and the protagonist had no highlights. I first wrote Chen Yang's appearance to give people the first impression of this person, and then polished him to fullness in the dungeon, and then followed the rule flow. The flow of rules is the essence of the weird novel. No matter how strong it is, if the rules of the weird are triggered, the weird will be killed, and the weird will be put to sleep. There is no need for the current supernatural confrontation. The weird at the beginning has no resistance. The weird controller just has some more abilities that ordinary people do not have, and there is no need for weird grading. Grading is the beginning of confrontation. Wouldn't it mean that A-level and C-level are crushed? Go back to the first dungeon and don't let the protagonist be so relaxed. The protagonist has an advantage. He was at the scene of the two guild killings. He knew more information about the first one who died. Don't let the senior sister be useless. Her information about the guile is very important and key information. In the first dungeon, the protagonist and his friends should absorb the knowledge of the guile under the leadership of Chen Yang at the beginning, and then integrate what they know. The information about this monster and the rules he analyzed for killing this ghost were used to deal with this ghost. Don't use gold. You can only deal with rules and nothing else. After a series of thrilling operations, he successfully controlled this monster. Then after everyone relaxed and slumped down, the cry of a baby rang out. One after another, the protagonist suddenly remembered the information given by his senior sister before, and he was suspected of being pregnant! ! This baby ghost is definitely more difficult to deal with than the senior ghost, because it has no intelligence and has never taken action before and does not know the rules of killing. However, this baby ghost does not necessarily have as wide a killing range as the senior ghost, so Chen Yang and the protagonist escaped after paying a certain price. The follow-up is that with the participation of the protagonist and Chen Yang, the two experienced people, together with the people supported by the relevant departments, they return to the teaching building, and several people pay a certain price. In this case, the protagonist successfully collected the baby ghost, because the senior ghost and the baby ghost are actually the same. We call this kind of twin ghosts. The ghosts are not necessarily strong. The ghosts are those who can create clones for trial and error or have stronger abilities to obtain information. But the twin ghosts, the ghost controller, even if I know that I am a twin ghost, no one knows what abilities the two of them have when they are connected. The ghost controller specializes. I wrote it with this idea in mind, expanding the dungeon. Others have a copy of the ghost, a dungeon has forty or fifty chapters, and you have a copy of these few chapters. It's strange that it looks good.