The Immortal Path of Tianxuan

I finished it in one go, the writing and plot are very smooth, and after half a month of digging for gold in the sand, I finally got something. The only doubt I have is why a former senior brother is involved in this matter? Is it for some foreshadowing for the future? In addition, this solution seems a bit complicated, and the probability of an accident is a bit high. But in short, the flaws are not concealed. Personally, I think it is still at the level of fairy grass.

Good grass and above, the only drawback is that there is no golden finger, which leads to insufficient enjoyment.

I dare not read the introduction. How can I write it without a golden finger? There are anti-inflammatory medicines, Han Li has the green bottle, Wang Lin has the beads, how can he be so prosperous without golden fingers?

In this fast-paced era, it is courageous to write a time-traveling and immortality novel without plug-ins.

How can an author achieve good results if he doesn't understand the readers' needs?

Yao Lang's body is like a jade tripod, with medicinal fragrance. It can be used for cultivation and breakthroughs. It is a rare elixir in the world of cultivation. Sects often give it to female golden elixir cultivators from other sects as gifts to build connections. There are also a small amount of it circulating in the black market, which is very popular. The contribution points obtained by Yin Ji when completing sect tasks can be called "Piao Zi", which are used to supplement the expenses. 😃

Well written, I'm reading the previous one too, the writing and logic are on top of good ones.

After reading Chapter 9, I thought it was quite good. There are no stupid upper-level managers who only want to persecute, and the conflict points are just right. I hope the author's book will become popular. Later, I still need to write a plot with a sense of crisis to better capture the readers.

You can refer to the Ancient God system in Immortal Rebellion, the realm beasts in Devouring Starry Sky, the Destruction God Clan at the end of Eternal Heart, the Ancient God Clan in Chaos Alchemy God and the Godhead that can be inherited and practiced, and the realm master practice system in Eternal Martial Arts written by Yue Zhongyin.

Help each other catch up, ninth place