The Immortal Path of Tianxuan

I finished it in one go. The writing and plot flowed smoothly; after searching for over half a month, I finally found something. My only question is why there's the whole "former senior brother" thing involved? Is it foreshadowing something later? Also, the solution seems a bit complicated, and the probability of something going wrong is quite high. But overall, the flaws don't outweigh the merits; I personally think it's still a top-tier read.

It's above average, but its only drawback is the lack of a cheat code, which makes it less satisfying.

I don't even dare to read the synopsis. How can they write without a cheat code? Xiao Yan has Yao Lao, Han Li has the green bottle, and Wang Lin has the bead. How can they thrive without cheat codes?

In this fast-paced era, writing a transmigration cultivation novel without any cheat codes is commendable.

How can an author who doesn't understand readers' needs possibly achieve good results?

The Medicine Master's body is like a jade cauldron, and his body carries the fragrance of medicine. It can be used for cultivation and breakthroughs. It is a rare spiritual medicine in the cultivation world. Sects often give it to female Golden Core cultivators from other sects as a gift to win over connections. A small amount also circulates in the black market and is very sought after.

Write well! I've been reading your previous book, and your writing style and logic are far superior to Liangcao's.

I found Chapter Nine to be quite good. There weren't any foolish, manipulative upper-level managers, and the conflicts were well-placed. I hope this book will be a hit. However, the later chapters need to include more dramatic, suspenseful elements to truly engage readers.

You can refer to the following: the ancient god system in *Xian Ni*, the world beasts in *Swallowed Star*, the destruction gods at the end of *Eternal Heart*, the ancient god race and the divine sparks that can be inherited and cultivated in *Chaos Pill God*, and the world lord cultivation system in *Eternal Martial Arts* written by Yue Zhongyin.

Help each other catch up, ninth place.