
Kill Me
杀我
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 100k Words
- Genre
- Realistic Fiction
- Subgenre
- Social Mystery
- Updated
- 28d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
41Chapters
0Votes
94Recs
5Fans
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Reader comments 2
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New book
This is the third book I've written at Starting Point.
Suggestion
There are too many words per paragraph, and each sentence within the paragraph is too long. For example, this paragraph (Chapter 2): If it is changed into a few short paragraphs, it may not be so difficult to read: And there is something wrong with the beginning of this paragraph. Adding "just returned" feels like it expresses my meaning more clearly. Lengthy articles are like overwhelming readers. In fact, they are more like serious literature, which will more or less put off those who are attracted by the title. Humble opinion.