Tokyo: The Superpowered Girl's Severe Dependency

After spending a month in prison, Yuzuru Rin has completely absorbed all the information of the original owner. So the original owner dropped out of school, worked several jobs to support his family, and died suddenly at his workstation. Just as the boss was about to drag the body to a competitor that was stealing customers, Rin Hanyu arrived.

The premise is interesting, and it's a great read. Some passages would be more concise if there were less dialogue. Overall, it's good. I'll wait until it's fully developed before reading it.

The character portrayals are somewhat stiff, and the emotional development feels abrupt and rushed without any build-up. 🙂

Investigation Report: "Number"-768 Subject of the survey: Rin Hanyu, the male protagonist of "Tokyo Ghoul: Heavy Addiction". Investigation results: [Resurrection through a corpse] Criteria for judgment: Abnormal traits: Transmigration Investigators, as the name suggests, are professionals who investigate and record the transmigration situations of transmigrators.

The quality of the writing is strange and hard to evaluate. Overall, it's a bit lacking, but not by much, which is odd.

It's written in such a messy way, I feel like it'll be hard to finish it.

The idea is great, but the plot feels disjointed.

Japanese high school students are strictly managed regarding part-time jobs; how could they possibly give you the chance to work yourself to death? The same applies to dropping out of school.

The first three chapters seem fine so far; let's keep reading.

The first few chapters seem pretty good and quite engaging. Although they're a bit formulaic, they're satisfying, and the "golden finger" (advantageous character/cheat) is well-placed.