A Cultivation Clan, Starting with an Everlasting Flame

Family cultivators often face three underlying problems: 1. The ability of cultivators to accumulate original capital. 2. Whether cultivation qualifications (or spiritual roots) can be inherited. 3. Does cultivation itself change human nature? I wonder what the author thinks?

But there is no main line at the moment. Even if there is a family genre, you have to have something to connect the story. At present, it seems that it is Tuan Huo, but is Huo the protagonist? If it weren't for him, what's the point? How could the whole family continue to live with him from generation to generation? At present, it seems that Goldfinger is just a flame shared by the family and has no consciousness of its own. At present, it depends on the author's ability to tell the story, because there is no protagonist who can be replaced. To be honest, it would be a pity to cut it off, but the author's storytelling ability is really good. There is a problem with the setting of this book. Readers must first have a clear protagonist when reading online articles. He can be small in length, but cannot be absent.

It seems to be a fast cut. It was originally flat and slow, but recently it suddenly accelerated, but the speed is very stiff.

The first few chapters are very delicately written, with emotional collisions and situational foreshadowing, and the author is very capable.

This is the book I invested in. I lost all my money. Why should I reward you? This is the first book I have rewarded at Qidian. That's it.

The overall character structure is okay, but there are ups and downs in the plot. The content of the plot is still relatively small, and some chapters are not explained clearly. In short, it is still good. Come on.

I can feel that the author is about to cut the book. After reading about chapter 45, the speed suddenly speeds up! If the conflict between the Hemingmen and the Yan family is slightly adjusted, it should not be difficult to put this book on the shelves! It's a pity that the author didn't persevere! Two books currently being read! One is Wanding, and the other is this one. I originally wanted to stay up late and read through it, but when I saw the sudden speedup, I always felt it was a pity.

The details of this book are handled very well, and the subtle plots are also well done. Don't worry, I'll just say it in a small tone. It should be a high-quality product.

It's okay, the writing is quite sophisticated.

Okay, the writing, plot and storytelling of the first few chapters are pretty good.