[Profound Mirror System] [Conquest of Otherworlds]
The good news: Li Zhengjun transmigrates into a Violet Palace immortal clan. It has a Violet Palace Ancestor, and he is a true-blooded direct descendant of the clan.
The bad news: The clan’s True Immortal is nearing the end of his lifespan, the clan is visibly in decline, and it is beset by enemies on all sides.
This world is rife with schemes and short on spiritual resources. Without a Violet Palace True Immortal to protect them, the entire clan is doomed.
Fortunately, Li Zhengjun has an Immortal Mirror within him. Not only can it take him to a world rich in resources, it can bring his clansmen along too!
Each time Li Zhengjun advances to a new realm, the number of people he can take across worlds increases.
When the Violet Palace Ancestor learns of this, he devotes the strength of the whole clan to raising Li Zhengjun, hoping to nurture a True Immortal within the fifty years he has left and restore the glory of the Violet Palace immortal clan!
From then on, the Li Clan begins its campaign of conquest across otherworlds.
“My grandson is a direct descendant of the Violet Palace line. He must cultivate the finest methods, and every spiritual resource in the clan is his to use!”
“Don’t feel safe in a small world? No need to worry. Pick any talisman, artifact, puppet, or formation in the clan.”
“Having trouble gathering resources in a small world? No need to worry. Establish a clan, pass down our cultivation methods, and let the locals do the work for us.”
“Someone in that small world is plotting against you? No need to worry. Take my life-bound treasure and show them what Violet Palace powers can do!”
Back in the clan, Li Zhengjun and his clansmen are timid and deferential.
In the otherworld, Li Zhengjun leads his clansmen as they slaughter their way through all opposition.
Years later, the Violet Palace Ancestor passes away, and cultivators everywhere grow restless. But no one expects bright light to shine across the land.
The Li Clan has produced a Bright Sun True Lord!
One problem is that everyone prioritizes family, which is unrealistic. It's fine to prioritize family, but everyone should have their own agenda; complete selflessness is absurd.
It's alright, but the emotions are a bit overdone. I know you're trying to create a family atmosphere, but I didn't come here to read about letters to my wife.
Don't let Wen Chao limit you. If you write that the Purple Mansion is comparable to the Nascent Soul, you're just asking for trouble.
Wen Chao's writing only describes a grotto-heaven, so he skipped the Spirit Realm. But you, the author, are writing about the Qi Refining and Qi Absorption realms being at the same level. The Golden Core True Monarch is equivalent to an Immortal. You've written the Purple Mansion realm as equivalent to the Nascent Soul realm, meaning you've skipped five or six realms.
The first chapter almost poisoned me! This isn't a traditional fantasy novel. In a world where Xuanjian is imprisoned, what's the point of giving the protagonist a useless talent? Even geniuses with no one to rely on can end up in jail. Dao Hui is incredibly important in this world, and you still give him a useless talent? Are you afraid he won't suffer enough?
Hopefully, it won't end up like this one, where the original world is the main world, and the world the protagonist transmigrates to is just a giant hidden world. It turns the story from a lighthearted, enjoyable read into a fearful, subservient, and scheming clown.
I read these kinds of stories to experience the protagonist gathering resources from both worlds and overtaking others, not to see them struggling to develop themselves only to have to compete for resources with the powerful figures of their own world. And to be so timid and afraid of revealing their abilities...
Having a Mingyang Emperor in the family is incredibly unlucky. First, he provokes countless enemies outside, and second, he turns the family into a giant battle royale arena.
Answering questions from Zhenjun's readers
There are drafts available; updates will be posted every night at 10 PM. [Main character]: The protagonist is a third-generation immortal who establishes a family in another world. He experiences no pressure or frustration throughout the entire journey and enjoys the ultimate crushing power of cultivation. [Handling in both areas] 1.
A good book, but the revisions are too bold.
I've read 29 chapters so far, and overall it's good. The Daoist theories are very clear, and it's evident that the author has a lot of ideas. It can be considered an excellent book. However, I'll point out some shortcomings so far. In short, the lower chapters lack reverence.
First of all, in order to break through the realm as quickly as possible, it's impossible to have a child first. That's quite... The primary task is to level up, and you've already introduced a female lead.
Thunder Devouring Heaven
I found a picture that looks quite similar. The AI has been revised 17 times, and it can't write the character anymore, so this is how it is.