One Piece: Who Still Has Dreams?

I suggest you change the introduction. Let alone the one-minute Gojo Enlightenment. Even if I give you the permanent Gojo Enlightenment, it wouldn't be too strong to let the pirates go.

Generally speaking, I came in based on the cover. I don't have the ability to realize five things, and I'm still fighting monsters and leveling up. I'm bored to death. Can I expand in the personal realm and kill the masters?

The writing is too messy, the time is all over the place, and it's hard to read like it's like keeping a running account.

I don't understand why One Piece has to do with Gojo Satoru. It is not necessary to frame other anime characters into One Piece novels. Which one can't be written about Haki, Devil Fruit, and Bloodline Factor? !

If you are cheating, you don't dare to open it too high.

I hope the situation will not happen again in the later period of the Devil Fruit book. Now readers are increasingly unable to accept that the protagonist is deflated and suffers a loss.

Don't you think the plot jumps too fast and it's quite confusing to read. There is also a problem with the plot connection. It is very blunt. The protagonist rushes to the next almost unrelated thing before he has solved the previous thing. Fortunately, the characters are still standing up, and the logic of behavior is smooth. I personally suggest that you reorganize the previous chapters, adjust the narrative rhythm appropriately, and polish the excessive plot points.

Writing those chapters of Hancock made me feel so disgusting 😰, it made me feel like something was written by a loser.

Today's One Piece is already so bad that it makes people laugh even if they want to, and you also add the one-minute limited edition of five. Are you going to choke me to death😂

Since the end of No Interest in Devil Fruits, the books I have written have become more and more messy, and I have basically not finished them. This one is even more messy.