Naruto: My Shadow Clone Technique Spawned Kaguya!

Since there is a clone of Kaguya Otsutsuki, go find Black Zetsu! Black Zetsu's good stuff, many spots' heritage, White Zetsu's Hashirama cells, fooled Black Zetsu into doing a great job 😏

To sum it up in one sentence, the protagonist is playing ninja games throughout the whole process. The plot is pretty good, and the content follows the original work and is passable. Except for some differences in content, it is the same as the original work. The protagonist doesn't know what he wants to do. There is no main line or definition. Even if it is daily life, it doesn't look like daily life. It's like the author has some ideas, and then he weaves them into the story without thinking. I don't know exactly what the story is about, and I write it wherever I think of it.

It can be seen from previous works such as Hunter. The author is actually very good at writing fan fiction, and the setting is also good, but the biggest shortcoming is "no goal". You have no idea what the protagonist is going to do or what he is going to do. Just like the previous hunter, absorbing death energy will make you stronger. Although it has limitations, it is still a good cheat. What is the result? Not only was he bullied by others, but he was beaten by the president as a "good point". The same goes for this book. What does the author want the protagonist to do? Summon Kaguya at the beginning, and then what? As far as fighting power is concerned, treating an old lady Tsunade as the first love in a dream lover. I have seen so many people who love Tsunade, but I have never seen one who loves her as a 16-year-old little sister. Many problems caused this book to achieve good results in the early stage due to its creativity, but it collapsed before the mid-term results. Can you believe that such an outstanding author's new book has not even received a high-quality product? The author's ability to withstand pressure has always been bad, and now he is probably starting to think about a new book... Sigh, you still don't know why Zizhu can get thousands of orders just by looking at the readers... People are really not as free as you to write wherever you think, and they really don't fail as much as you do when writing female protagonists...

A good hand is played poorly. The random summoning at the beginning was still a bit interesting, but later on, settings such as the ability to choose the direction of return, the ability to cancel clones by oneself, and the ability to choose to summon characters by oneself were added. It was not improved at all, but the fun was directly cut off by 90%. If you reverse patch a somewhat unique golden finger and turn it into an ordinary dirty land reincarnation flow, you are also a talent. Seeing as you are an old author and can't even understand the basic cool points, I can definitely suspect that you bought the beginning or just wrote the beginning.

According to the picture above, it seems a bit exaggerated to say that all shadow clones can be maintained until they are broken down into ashes. However, if the effects of shadow clones are all attributed to "because it is Naruto of the Six Paths, so yes, yes, yes", I think it is also very unreasonable Shadow clones are very awesome physical clones. , So awesome that he can even independently gather natural energy and refine magic chakra - and chakra is in the meridians, so the shadow clone cannot be like a balloon with only one layer of skin, but a real entity with flesh, blood, bones and meridians If not, how could the Byakugan, which can see directly, not see through? As for a real physical clone with flesh, bones and meridians, it must be broken at a touch. I think it is a bit unreasonable and difficult to accept. The shadow clone even reproduced the Bagua seal and the tailed beast one-to-one. During the fourth battle, Naruto every time All shadow clones have the same "shadow clone" of the Nine Tails in their bodies. It can only be said that the rogue's magical skills are like this As for why it gives people the impression that they can be broken at a touch, it is explained in the comics that the biggest application scenario of shadow clones is to obtain information. On the contrary, the crowd tactics like Naruto in the first part are purely Damn it, Naruto in Shippuden rarely does this - with the amount of chakra of a normal ninja, even if only one shadow clone is separated, it is hard to say how much combat power the chakra will have after the chakra is divided The first part of Naruto's Tenten crowd tactics, the result is that even the shadow clone can not return the memory I know that the performance of Naruto's shadow clone in the first part is not of much reference value From a realistic point of view, this may be Kishimoto adding new settings to the shadow clone, which caused Naruto's IQ to be greatly reduced Explanation from the comic itself Either this is when Naruto was in the first part At that time, the shadow clone was not proficient enough and he did not really understand this technique - after all, during the survival exercise, Kakashi mentioned that with Naruto's novice level shadow clone at the time, it would be released after a maximum of 5 minutes. This at least proved that the shadow clone technique does have a level of proficiency Either, it is Naruto's body's self-protection instinct that is at work - although I don't understand what's going on, I feel very tired every time I release the shadow clone, and it's not just the fatigue that consumes chakra. I think a "body memory flow" ninja like Naruto will not be mistaken about this, and The more shadow clones are beaten and the heavier they are, the more tired they will be after being lifted. Therefore, Naruto subconsciously protects himself, which causes his shadow clones to break at a touch, and the more shadow clones are separated, the more the shadow clones will break at a touch We can basically think of it this way For: It wasn't until Shippuden accelerated his training with the help of multiple shadow clones that Naruto truly mastered the shadow clone technique If the above is a lot of verbosity and you still feel unconvincing, it doesn't actually matter. I am not Kishimoto, and my opinion does not count at all. But the complaints should focus on replying to this post, or this chapter corresponding to the paragraph in the text, thank you.

There is no plot advancement, only two chapters have passed, and a relative who seems to be good to the protagonist pops up out of nowhere. Why did he go there before? What do you think of this plot? There is also a 20-year-old genin passerby as a teammate. You will smooth out the wrinkles in my brain. What kind of plot allows you to write these two chapters in which you want to be strong but then suppressed? This is too depressing. She is now a Jing 3 in terms of combat power. Kaguya's clone is a grandma, no, she is simply a high-quality woman bred by

It can be seen from the recent update that he is absent-minded. He has repeatedly postponed the update time, and the word count is sometimes low and sometimes high. It is typical for a new book to not update. If there is no update today, it will probably be unfinished 😅 Thanks to me, I have been following it all the way. The subject matter is obviously very novel, but the author is not interested.

The title of your book is not good. If it weren't for your author's name, I wouldn't have clicked it. Please change the cover and title.

This is a Naruto fanfic that feels very careless and random. There is nothing wrong with Kaguya being the ancestor of chakra, she brought this system to her. But celestial magic is a local system, okay? His two sons fought with her but failed to win. Toad Sage found Hagoromo and taught him the senjutsu system. After he learned it, he rescued his younger brother, and finally the two of them sealed Kaguya together. So Kaguya doesn't know how to be a sage at all, and no one will take her to get started, but it's not necessarily true that she can't learn it. After all, she has that level, but at least she doesn't know how to do celestial magic before the seal, and there's nothing she can do if she wants to learn it after the seal. There is also this sage mode. I am speechless. The orthodox sage mode is eye shadow tattoos and so on. Here, I have unified into the Tsutsuki clan and raised two horns. I am also speechless. Also, I always use the measurement units in the formula book. You are fine 2, virtuous 2, and powerful. I feel awkward watching it. I haven't read the manga, but in the anime, I really haven't seen the characters say this. What I dislike the most about fan fiction is that there are too many made-up settings that are inconsistent with the original work. Even if settings are to be added, it is best not to conflict with the settings in the original work. The advantage of fandom itself is that it is easier to have a sense of immersion, but if many settings are inconsistent with the original knowledge, it will be uncomfortable to watch, which will filter out readers.

I'm really speechless. It doesn't make any sense at all. Don't write about how the protagonist improves his strength and advances the plot. There are a lot of useless settings there. A lot of nonsense. Let your imagination be the main thread. Whether you write a plot or a collection of settings, the most disgusting thing is that you suppress your ability. There are dozens of them. The protagonist is still short of chakra. With Kaguya as her assistant, she doesn't have to write the story with a group of ninjas playing house and plot. You can't write without the original plot, right? There's also the plot of a novel. Spring water. It has a fart effect on the main plot