Dragon Ball: An Epic Tale

What makes this book so great is that the author, through a long-term plot, allows the protagonist to forge a completely different path in the Dragon Ball world compared to other fanfiction where the protagonist immediately wishes for Saiyan blood, yet the story remains logically consistent. The 40,000-year timeframe is particularly brilliant!

Regarding the inability to perceive the realm of God through Qi perception According to the author's description, everyone is actually there from the beginning, but some people are standing at a higher altitude, and some are in the basin; The improvement of Qi means that one's height is increased, but one cannot fly upward steadily and stop in mid-air.

This book is truly poison to me. The author portrays the protagonist as utterly useless. Anyone taken to the Dragon Ball world would be completely different. The allure of superhuman power is irresistible to anyone. Even knowing they are from Earth, the protagonist wouldn't have such a personality.

This book is definitely going to be abandoned. Firstly, the author might forget things as they write, and secondly, there's the pressure of worrying that even with careful writing, it won't be good enough. Then the longer it drags on, the less confident they become, constantly lowering their standards while telling themselves, "I can do it!

I'll check in and wait for the author's reply.

This synopsis is a bit discouraging. The idea of ​​someone transmigrating to the Dragon Ball world and then worrying about whether or not to cultivate martial arts for fear of affecting Goku seems absurd.

To be honest, the first three chapters felt a bit too padded. The protagonist became overly witty, and the author seemed too eager to create comedic moments. These aren't major issues, but no matter how many references are used, the main plot can't be lost! Dragon Ball isn't a slice-of-life story like Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf, where each episode is largely unrelated.

Personally, I think this is the best Dragon Ball fanfiction I've ever read. You could say the author is forcibly providing an explanation for everything illogical in the original work, but this explanation is reasonable and self-consistent. It's not like other novels where someone gets a Saiyan body, makes a wish to Shenron, and then becomes invincible.

You've written so much nonsense, and you haven't even started the main storyline yet. I'm sending you a sense of utter disappointment.

The author didn't compromise. With a solid foundation in another book, the author wrote what they wanted to write. The most compelling story is one of the weak rising upwards, just as the most exciting part of "Eternal Life" is the chapter on supernatural powers and mystical realms, and the most exciting part of "Peerless One" is the chapter on the martial arts world.