One Piece: Who Still Has a Dream?

I suggest you revise the description. Even if you had a permanent Gojo Satoru in One Piece, let alone a one-minute version, he wouldn't be that strong.

I usually click on this site because of the cover. Without Gojo's abilities, and still stuck leveling up, it's incredibly boring. Can't we have a personal space to explore, where I can sit back and kill the gacha master?

It's written in a very messy way, the dates are all over the place, it's incomprehensible and looks like a diary entry.

I don't understand, what does One Piece have to do with Satoru Gojo? Why insist on including other anime characters in the One Piece novels? Haki, Devil Fruits, bloodline factors—can't those be included?!

This is terrible. I suggest the author go back and study the exciting parts of the early and middle stages of that Devil Fruit fanfic. If that fanfic was an S-rank, this one is at best a B-rank.

Even those who use cheats wouldn't dare to use their full power.

Hopefully, we won't see a repeat of the later episodes of that Devil Fruit manga. Readers are increasingly unable to accept the protagonist suffering setbacks or losses.

The protagonist has absolutely no idea how to use Gojo Satoru Mode. Do you know how insidious the Muryokudo is? Unless the brain has a special defense mechanism, like Sukuna letting Fushiguro Megumi's soul withstand the Muryokudo, but even if you take 0.01 Seconds more of the Muryokudo, you're still overloaded. The Muryokudo at full health is the kill threshold.

Don't you think the plot jumps around too quickly, making it quite confusing to read? The plot also has problems with its transitions; it feels very abrupt. The protagonist hasn't even resolved the previous issue before rushing off to the next, almost unrelated one. Fortunately, the characters are fairly well-developed, and their behavior logic is coherent.

One Piece is already so bad it's laughable, and you add a one-minute limited edition of five lines. Are you trying to choke me? 😂