Rising from the Army, Starting as a Kennel Keeper

Do you have a lieutenant general grandfather and a martyr father?

Don't write it as a special battle! It's so boring and the ceiling is low

In the conversation, it's better to use less words such as "why", "how" and so on. It's fine when reading a book, but when listening to a book, it sounds a bit formal.

You're not going to become a special forces soldier just by writing, are you? No matter how awesome the special forces soldier is, his rank is still a colonel. You can't be promoted to a university unless you squeeze through the railway line.

It's a bit watery. It's recommended to skip some content that's too daily.

You used to write four chapters a day, but in the past few days, why have you changed to two chapters a day?

No matter how awesome the special forces soldier is, he is still his younger brother to Man Guangzhi. That's a person who can make the whole army miss him.

A bit rubbish, a college degree with a double degree? Do you want to see what this is?

Will the prospects for military service and promotion be lower than those for military service and examination?

{"NickName":"YukiZhao's mother","UserId":503373116}The master watching the door comes out and lets everyone see what you are like

{"NickName":"YukiZhao's mother","UserId":503373116} Let's take a look at this thing. You will be scared of it as soon as you hear how much it costs.

The first forty-four chapters are pretty good, I hope to continue working hard.