Journey to the West: Starting from the Tongbei Monkey Is Indescribable

After reading the first chapter, let me summarize the main content: the protagonist Shen Xiaojin traveled to the world of Journey to the West and entered the body of an old monkey. He was about to die. Fortunately, with the special effect of Silupi, he swallowed the grass and gained the ability to photosynthesize so that he could barely survive for a month. Later, he would need to continue to eat long-lived creatures to survive. Then he and another old monkey witnessed the birth of the Stone Monkey, and laid some foreshadowings. First of all, let's talk about the advantages: 1. The golden finger is very interesting. It has a probability of acquiring the opponent's characteristics by eating them all. This setting can derive many interesting effects, such as the photosynthesis at the beginning is very creative. 2. The main plot is very clear. Shen Xiaojin has to keep eating in order to survive. What abilities will he gain later? I'm looking forward to it Let me talk about the areas that I think can be improved (for reference only): 1. The description is too sideways and difficult to read. For example, in this paragraph, we cannot directly add: He actually time-traveled into the body of an old monkey, and he has not long left to live! There are fairy birds and vultures in front of it. I really turned it over and read it again to understand what the protagonist has become after time travel. 2. The settings are unclear. It's good that the author refers to some professional books and settings, but readers may not necessarily have an idea of ​​what you are talking about, such as Silupi and Three Corpses and Nine Insects. You can at least describe what it looks like, what the legend is like, and where it comes from. Silupi, ok anyway, it's Goldfinger, and the description of the three corpses and nine insects I really can't understand it. As the name suggests, even if he can see it, why can he help other monks solve their inner demons by seeing this black insect? And where did the old monkey get such an incredible ability? Looked very confused. 3. The subject is confusing. The protagonist himself is also an old monkey, and his partner is also an old monkey. The old monkey has not yet been named, so he is called the old man when he speaks. It is really difficult to judge who is talking, especially before the character image and speaking characteristics are established in the early stage. If you can add what xx said and xx complained to match the speaker and the content, the reading experience will be much better.

Almost every chapter contains content about alchemy, Ziwei Dou Shu and Zen. More traditional Yi-Xue elements will be added in the future, and these contents have relevant sources. If you click on the bookmark, you can read the latest chapter every day and learn a little bit about it together. There are differences between novels and reality, and they are fictitious. Do not try them lightly. My mental state is very good and my head is normal! If there are professionals, you are welcome to correct me and make comments. It will be a blessing.

It's great to watch, and it opens up a different journey to the west 😍

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