
Shrouding the Heavens: Wang Teng, the Northern Emperor, Inherits the Azure Emperor’s Arts!
遮天:北帝王腾,传承苍帝法!
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Xuanhuan
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- 21d ago
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So what if there is a connection, this doesn't work, that doesn't work, just forget about the heroine. The famous female character in "Zhe Tian", who is not related to Ye Fan, is she still afraid that Ye Fan will cause trouble? She is timid and still wants to become an emperor. Let's just forget about being a eunuch. Since no one is satisfied, then author, who do you think the heroine is?
Yan Ruyu is the best. Ji Biyue, since you don't want to give me the pen and ink, you might as well not write it and find Yan Ruyu directly. It's impossible for the ancient emperor to marry you. In your book, you can't even marry Ji Ziyue, the direct descendant of the void for countless generations, let alone those daughters of the ancient emperor. What's more, others are not of the same race as you. It's simply impossible. Instead of wasting time and energy on these meaningless things, it's better to choose the one with the highest cost performance. Isn't it just Yan Ruyu? The Emperor's Sutra and Emperor's soldiers are all there, and the Qing Emperor is still alive. If you know the plot, anyone in your right mind will know who to choose. What's the use of marrying these Ji Dao families? The Emperor's Scripture cannot be passed down, and the Emperor's weapons cannot be yours, so what are you trying to do? Of course, you can also write about being rejected by the Yakuza forces and being slapped in the face by learning the anti-inflammatory path.
A must-read for the author. According to my analysis, the role of a woman from the ancient royal family of the Great Emperor who is suitable for the protagonist's marriage.
The protagonist can marry someone from the ancient royal family. There are many in the fandom, and the ancient princesses are also very talented. The protagonist can only marry women who have no connection with Ye Fan in the current timeline, and they must be from the emperor or the ancient royal family. Do not create an original heroine. Writing an original heroine in a fandom is a failure. According to the current timeline Princess Yudie, Yaochi Saint, Yaoguang Saint, Qi Qi, Xia Jiuyou, Yan Ruyu, Jiang Tingting are too young and have a good relationship with Ye Fan. Don't think about these. Why not choose them, because some have close contact with Ye Fan, and some have physical contact with Ye Fan. This is not good, and I feel uncomfortable just thinking about it. The heroines you can choose now are either from the ancient royal family, the Golden Goddess, Huo Lin'er, the daughter of ten thousand dragons, and the princesses of the four major dynasties of Zhongzhou. Princess Yueling of Jiuli is definitely not good. Wang Teng just snatched their imperial soldiers in Zhongzhou and killed their people. The princesses of the two dynasties of Guhua and Shenzhou are not described in the original text, so don't write them, because writing original heroines is a big deal, unless you want readers to run away, so Zhongzhou can There is only one princess of the Daxia Dynasty left to choose, because her name is written in the original text, and Ye Fan has no close or physical contact with her. Moreover, the Imperial Dragon Qi method pioneered by the Emperor of the Daxia Dynasty is very good, comparable to the Dou Zi Mi. Although the protagonist does not have the Dou Zi Mi, he has Feixianjue, which is also the ultimate attack power. Moreover, people in the Daxia Dynasty used swords, and the protagonist also uses a sword. The Imperial Dragon Qi is a perfect match for the protagonist's Heavenly Emperor Sword. You don't want to tamper with the Yaochi Saint. Your description of Zhongzhou Huahua Pond makes me very worried. You don't want to tamper with anything. The previous writing about Hua Yunfei has been criticized by readers, and in the original text, the Yaochi Saint was seen by Ye Fan with his heavenly eyes. You don't think it's disgusting. I still feel disgusted when I read it. Other fanfics say it's because that didn't happen. I can help you avoid lightning in advance. To sum up, the protagonists available are Golden Goddess, Ten Thousand Dragons Girl, Huo Lin'er, plus Xia Yilin, a princess of the Great Xia Dynasty. The heroine can choose two or three from the four people I mentioned. In the 2026 Zhetian fanfic, if you look carefully, there is no single heroine. Basically, there are about 2 to 3, and some write four. Don't listen to what some readers say. Multiple female protagonists will not affect your grades at all. Just write them occasionally. This is how the articles with multiple female protagonists in Zhetian are written. There is one female protagonist each from the ancient tribe and the human race, so that the protagonist can have power on both sides.
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The author can just find two more from ancient tribes in the future. Ji Biyue's talent is still too great, and the Ancient Emperor's daughter can become a high-level quasi-emperor by herself even without relying on Wang Teng, and she can mobilize the Ancient Emperor's soldiers at any time. Both the Three Heavenly Emperors and this year's Zhetian fanfics have several female protagonists. Is it okay for the protagonist to marry two more? What's more, the ancient princess will benefit even more.
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Author, is the protagonist practicing too slowly now? He needs to speed up his practice and describe the thunder tribulations that break through the big and small realms. You also need to take a good look at the thunder tribulations of each realm of Ye Fan in the original book. You also need to sort out your previous plots. You often forget some things. For example, the ruthless secret technique you obtained dozens of chapters ago. I have compiled it for you in the comment area. In this kind of life and death duel, don't you actually use it? And don't forget to smelt the fairy gold you obtained before. In the next chapter, a saint is coming. How should you deal with it? The protagonist's cultivation speed is at least faster than that of Ye Fan in the original novel. Otherwise, would he be in chaos and waiting to die?
Don't be blind, face your own problems and change them.
You always update so little every day, always only updating 4,000 words. Other Zhetian fandoms are published with 5,000 and 6,000 words per day. You update so little that readers have no interest in reading. You always don't change this problem and say that your grades are not good. You and other Zhetian fans have no obvious advantages. Other new Zhetian fanzhi writers are good. You still know that you have no advantage, and you know that you have to update at least 5,000 words every day. You are the person who updates the least every day in Zhetian fanfiction. If you really don't change this problem, then your book should be finished. Even if you are not a full-time book writer, you can still update 5,000 words a day. You don't know how to increase the number of words after it is published. What are you really thinking? What I said is really just for your own good. If you don't update the word count more, how can you survive in this fiercely competitive Zhetian fanfic? Can get along with perfect attendance. Today's readers are very picky, don't you know how to update the word count more? If you don't know how to correct the problem, how can you make progress? Maybe what I said doesn't sound very nice, but that's the problem with this book now. The word count is too few, only 4,000 words. If you write five to six thousand words, or even tens of thousands of words, every day, your grades will definitely be better than what you are now, but you just pretend not to see it and don't change this problem. That's all 😒
Let's summarize Wang Teng's current configuration.
Scriptures: Ancient Imperial Scriptures and Wang Family Great Scriptures. Sacred Art: True Dragon Seal. Chaos Ancient Secret Technique: Chaos Ancient Holy Technique, Cross Star Realm Crossing, Chaos Heaven Emperor Technique, Eternal Banishment, All Souls Transformation Dao Ganges River Sands, Martial Arts Sky Eye, Kill My Ming Dao Technique, Chaos Ancient Demon Fetus Transformation Technique, (Chaos Ancient Holy Technique, Eternal Banishment These two are forbidden imperial arts, Chaos Ancient Emperor Technique and other forbidden imperial techniques are not written in the original text, the author has to create it yourself, there are The picture shows the evidence. The secret technique of the ruthless man: The Flying Immortal Technique, the Holy Technique of Ten Thousand Transformations, One Thought of Blooming to Rule the World, The Way of Killing the Heavens, the Three Thousand Small Worlds, the Technique of Crossing the Gods, the Dao Treasure Vase, and the Only Sacred Technique. Nine Secrets: The Secret of the Former Word, the Secret of the Soldier.
The pace should be a little faster, and the word count should not be too high. Most readers don't like water. It makes no sense to write some new plots and follow the step-by-step plot of spiritual practice. Unless you are famous. My proposal. After all, readers nowadays are a bit fast-paced. During the protagonist's practice, he will deal with visions, divine shapes, Taoism and so on. Most of them become emperors within 300 chapters. Take a look at the recent books written by Zhetian colleagues, about the same genre, and see what tricks they can do. Then add it to your own book.
In fact, the Ji family can still marry, but they can be replaced by Ji Biyue. The palm-sized piece of eternal blue gold and the ancient emperor's scripture can still be obtained, and you don't have to worry about being eroded. The reason why Wang Teng was eroded in the original work was only because he was beaten to death by Ye Fan at the Ji family station, and only a ray of remnant soul was left. After you get it, hand it over directly to your master to handle it for you.
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