The King's Avatar: Starting by Assisting Ye Qiu in Joining Happy

Greetings, dear readers. This is my first fanfiction of the novel *The King's Avatar*. I hope you'll support it. My initial idea was that, since it's fanfiction, it should follow the original plot exactly. However, having written up to chapter 100, I suddenly felt compelled to make some significant changes to the original text.

Isn't she a bit too old? 21?

I mean, let's avoid a romantic subplot and just let it flow naturally. Like a close buddy relationship. Otherwise, it's really hard to pull off a romance in an esports story. No matter the type of romance, it's always difficult to maintain a strong connection in an esports novel.

As a fan fiction, I'm very disappointed. The author either uses the original setting and writes their own original story, or they explore other branches of the story. They failed to do either, making it seem like the protagonist of a webcam story.

I came here because of the title "The King's Avatar," and surprisingly, the whole story flowed smoothly. So far, I haven't found any major flaws. I'm surprised there are so few comments, and even those are negative; I'll support this new author. I'm looking forward to the development of the relationship with Tang Rou. Hurry up and finish this part, kick out that idiot Liu Hao, and start the sweet and innocent development! 🤔

I remember sharpshooters use one hand, right? Zhou Zekai uses two pistols, I think it's because of his equipment.

It's well-written, but I've been procrastinating lately.

1. The main character lacks a strong presence. The characters are not well-defined, and the main character is even written as a supporting character. 2. The plot development was not unexpected. Most of it follows the original story, but Full-Time Master is more of an urban novel than a game novel. It's mostly read for the character designs, and I personally have no interest in games.

I've always been curious about how the equipment editor is designed, so I've tried to describe its principles and process. Please forgive any shortcomings.

I can't take it anymore. I haven't even finished two chapters. The protagonist's excessive fawning over Ye Xiu is just too much for me; it's a bit too cheesy.