Warhammer: Child of Light

1: Female Astartes are a point of dissuasion. Almost no one who reads Warhammer novels can accept this. 2: There are too many women around Clark at this stage. Plus those 3 female heirs. It has begun to affect the reading experience. Under the control of the author. 3: It is recommended not to write about sexual transformation. There are few written about the entire starting point. It's hard to navigate. (Clark himself is very charming. When you write about the metamorphosis, you are giving strong emotional hints to the readers. How will you describe this kind of emotion later? How do you plan to write about other women's emotions?) Don't be clever when writing about the metamorphosis.

I don't understand why there is a female version of the Astartes. Anyone who has watched Lords of Space knows that if it appears in Warhammer and the Loyalists and Chaos factions are all unified, then the Order of Extermination must be severely punished. The Extermination Order appears one second, and the Extermination Order hits the head the next second.

In the second chapter, the writing style seems to be wrong. Isn't this Warhammer? Why do I feel like five great emperors are fighting in subspace? 😂

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There are only two most important things about Warhammer fandom. One is to be familiar with Warhammer's world view and combat power system, and avoid private settings (Warhammer's background and combat power settings are very complete. Private settings are like poisoning. It is recommended that you check it out if you encounter a setting you don't know. It is very important) The second is the issue of writing style bias. Go and read the good Warhammer books yourself. All these books have a special feature. War means grandeur and passion. The essence of the original Warhammer novel is a space opera of courage, hope and death. Readers who read the fanfic are all eating "hot pot" for this "sugar garlic" Therefore, the writing style and plot must be strong enough and burning. For example, it should be foreshadowed for ten chapters and write about a group of Astra Militarum soldiers dying calmly in the face of a huge alien enemy, and then the protagonist appears and lights the counterattack horn. This kind of sweeping over the sky, changing the world, adding a little sacrifice and tragedy of war, is the favorite taste of hammer guys 🙂 The secret is left to you, I hope you can write it well

To be honest, I don't quite understand why some people think it's toxic that the protagonist has no memory. To be honest, what if you know the future of each character? It is just a result, and this result is caused by the accumulation of every little thing in hundreds of years of life. It is almost impossible to be changed by a few random interventions made by the protagonist. It's like students know that if they study hard, they can get good grades, but how many of them really work hard for it? Knowing that smoking is harmful to your health, how many people are smoking? Knowing that staying up late is bad for your health, how many people have a regular schedule? There are always various reasons for us to do things that we know are not good. So, I don't think that knowing what the future will be like will necessarily change it. In my opinion, memory is meaningless. It even carries memory itself and is proud of it. This kind of assumption itself is poisonous and highly poisonous. Just like Coze went crazy because of the prophecy, what can be changed is never the prophecy, but the will and actions of individual human beings.

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Why does Chapter 6 say that Clark's world will become a world full of poisonous gas and smoke in the future? Isn't it a bad world in heaven? Isn't Clark even capable of managing a world? Or is Clark really so powerless in the future that he can't even control his hometown? As the actual ruler of the planet, Clark did not want to govern the planet until it was as prosperous and powerful as Ultramar. At least it can't be too bad Turn the paradise world into a world full of poisonous gas and smoke? ? What do you think I really don't understand.

Let's be honest, this book title is terrible! In fact, I have read it several times, but I just don't want to open it and read it. It has a very boring feeling, especially the first chapter. After reading it, I became more sure of my thoughts. If I hadn't listened to it and read it directly, I would definitely not be able to stand it, but I didn't think about it. The back part is actually pretty good to read. At least there is no self-pleasure, no uncomfortable second creation, and there is no such thing as belittling the power of subspace, both inside and outside the words. This makes people very happy. Come on~ write it carefully later~ Also, can you change the title of the book? Also, how about changing the first chapter? It's really a problem!