Marvel: From the Start, I Drew Atomic Breath

What kind of happy power does this system actually collect? I'm so fucking funny, even if we don't use our brains to watch it, we won't be so insincere.

The conversation with the system at the beginning is unbearable.

There is too much bullshit in the system. If you write this just to improve the word count, then just pretend I didn't say it.

Is it a Renaissance? Who is watching this bragging and spanking system?😰

How can you write this kind of novel for people? Can you read it yourself? Don't imitate adults in writing books.

There is something wrong with the introduction. The Chitauri soldier pointed his gun at the protagonist, and then he remembered a voice, "Ding, the Great Carousel of All Realms is at your service." This sentence was enough to kill him several times.

I don't understand the main character's behavior, it's like a primary school student and I want to scold him directly.

I thought my writing was bad enough until I read this book

Just write a new book with a dialogue system. Not many normal people can read this kind of novel now.

I can no longer read novels like this. A passionate young man risked a nuclear explosion to save the American people who were in dire straits. Afterwards I was bullied. 🙂🙂🙂