American Comics: I Want to Become a Kamen Rider

I haven't read it yet, but the sentence in the introduction about hating myself for not being reborn in the most chaotic era is already far away from people. It was identified as Gua Gua La.

For time-travelers, even if you don't read Marvel, you must know heroes. Don't write the protagonist as an indigenous person. Mutants are already easy to lose their combat power. You also make the protagonist look like the indigenous people. You may not know the name of the hero, but it is impossible not to know those nicknames. The famous Spider-Man, Captain America, Wolverine. If you write the time-traveler as an indigenous person, it is unnecessary. Secondly, there is too much nonsense. But novels are not dramas. You will spend money to subscribe later and watch a lot of verbal exchanges. After a few of them are read, if you want to write with a sense of belief, either improve your ability to abbreviate or stop writing. There is potential so far, but you must know how to stop it and don't take it for granted. Showa ability is suitable for the early stage, ability in the first ten years of Heisei is suitable after Iron Man comes out, and ability in the next ten years is suitable after Avengers 3

More than 70 chapters, the investment is so small, I am not the author to criticize, you really have to absorb the readers' comments, the plot direction is okay, but there is something wrong with the characters and plot. The protagonist has begun to break away from the feeling of a time traveler, and has been assimilated by No. 1. I only feel that the protagonist travels to Marvel like a knight, not the ability of a time traveler to get the Kamen Rider. In Marvel, the AI ​​description of the plot is too nonsense, don't ramble, make a lizard man, describe the inner feelings of the other party in a long time, and describe the inner feelings of the other party.

The beginning is good, but the later chapters are a bit boring as I keep introducing the system functions.

I feel like I've read it in my mind. Nowadays, I don't write about a lot of knights, but I write about a number one who is limited by the era. He has traveled through Marvel and must have some cool transformations to feel more comfortable.

Gaining the abilities of other knights but not having their transformation modes makes the story much less attractive. For example, I was really looking forward to Ajituo's transformation vest and his special abilities, but the result is still No. 1 Plus a windbreaker... No. 1 Is written as too invincible, and without an opponent that can threaten it, the story is very weak. How long can it be written blindly?

I really want to know, do you have to be Caucasian to become a Kamen Rider in American comics? Just like in the comic book world, one has to be Japanese to become a Kamen Rider. Of course, some are Chinese, but there are relatively few!

Overall it's pretty good! It's just that the characters and timeline are wrong! !

The writing is very chivalrous, but the ranking is too low. I hope you can follow up soon.

Where's the little spider? The little spider is gone.