Starting with Sun and Moon in Disarray, I Solo Queue with Myself and It's Not Bad

Ying Xinguo, Jiang Mingzi's weakest and most honest disciple, held Jiang Mingzi in both respect and a hint of skepticism.

The protagonist's cheat ability in this book is called "Arena". It has only one function—to pull people into the arena, and defeat them to gain a portion of their power and abilities. It is simply divided into: For this world—the Dream Arena. The Arena of All Heavens, open to all realms. The former links to various characters in this world, while the latter links to oneself in all the myriad worlds.

The writing is decent, and I like the subject matter, but there's one part that really detracts from the reading experience. I've seen the author has written several books already, so I'd like to offer a suggestion from a reader: cut out all the long passages of narration or the protagonist's inner monologues. Half of the two thousand words are just explanations, which is a headache to read.

To be honest, this kind of cheat code is not as good as the 99 kind, and the life is too bland and boring.

Gao Haoguang waited for over a hundred years and finally had the chance to say those words to his master.

If you delve too deeply into "Stealing the Stars in September," it's a cesspool devoid of causality; there's no causal correction here, only parallel universes. After the final battle, all the Seventh Senses disappeared, but Kuibowa could still develop hair growth serum using Hell's Blood.

He witnessed his master kill his grandmaster, and then personally saw his master off.

It's too wordy, always asking and answering itself. It poses a question in the first paragraph and then answers it in the next.

All I can say is that it's overdone. Every time a new version of oneself appears, the same events are rewritten from a different perspective. The confrontations consist of lengthy internal monologues from the victor and then from the vanquished, interspersed with repetitive descriptions of the environment. I'll specifically criticize Chapter 46.

On Shi Guagua's reactions before and after learning that the Wanye Rule had turned into a world without tomorrow and that he still had to go to school