Young Dragon Controller: Within Ten Days, Transform into a Dragon and Break Through the Realm

Halfway through the book, I found the content was too rushed, too concise, and a bit too laborious. Instead, the book title and introduction were not done well 1. First, the title and introduction. This does not mean that you have to focus all your energy on the title and introduction, but you cannot not pay attention at all. The title of the book should be complete, or let people know what you are writing. However, with such a long title, I have not read it in full, and I have no idea what you are going to write about. And why do you emphasize youth in the title? The selling point of your book is not your age. If you really can't write a shorter title, it would be better than yours. Someone has already mentioned the introduction, so I won't go into it. 2. You use too much force in your writing. Strictly speaking, the article should be refined, but that is on the basis of ensuring the smoothness of the article. Yours has affected the fluency. It is too tight. You will see that your fluency in replying to netizens' comments in the comment area will be better. You have to relax a little and don't keep thinking about it. After all, this is not ancient times, and the refined words do not mean that the article is good. The focus of whether the article is good or not is whether it is appropriate, not whether the metaphor is subtle or the parallels are not neat. And don't always have your heart wander when two people meet. It's not normal to do this for the first time. What you write must make everyone feel immersed in it. You don't even need to deliberately pursue a sense of immersion. Before writing, just think about whether normal people would do this. If it conforms to the actions and thoughts of normal people, the sense of immersion will naturally come. As for foreshadowing, that is something to consider later. 3. The plot is too fast and the pace is too urgent. In some places, more writing can be done. You are pushing forward as if something is chasing you behind you. I don't know how many words you have to write, but this pace is completely unnecessary. 4. Update problem. You haven't updated it for two days before it was put on the shelves. This is not okay. Don't stop changing the article every now and then. Write a few pieces first while ensuring the fluency of the article, and then spend an hour or two every day correcting typos and grammatical errors. , Just adjust the rhythm of the article. The most important thing for you now is to finish writing first. Only after you finish writing will you know what the whole book is about. And as I said before, you revised it too hard, but you need to relax a little now. Haven't you written hundreds of thousands of words? Correct the grammatical errors, correct the typos, adjust the rhythm and then put it up one after another. It's still the same sentence. The most important thing for you now is to finish writing it first, rather than revising the text.

After reading the book, I must have prepared it for a long time before starting to write it, and revised it over and over again. As a result, I used too much force, the writing was not smooth, there was no sense of immersion, and the protagonist and main line were very vague. Personally, I feel that AI is involved. The summary is, it doesn't look good. The suggestion is to write more.

I haven't read the book yet, and if I complain a little bit, the author Daye Ye can ignore it. The introduction is to prepare you for fun and build anticipation. It cannot be written as an instruction manual. Readers hate it when the author teaches them how to read the novel. The title of the book is not very good, and it is not very exciting. At first glance, I thought it was about controlling animals and transforming into dragons, which raises the reading threshold. In terms of content, after reading the introduction, I made a blind guess that it should be a group portrait novel. I guess the author is a newcomer and his writing skills are not strong enough. He cannot complete a novel with just a few flashes of inspiration. The author must be somewhat idealistic, so he chose this subject. Finally, I guess the author is straight-haired. Judging from the introduction and title of the book, he probably can't pass the inward shot.

I came here from an advertisement placed by an author elsewhere. I haven't read it yet. I only read the introduction. Is the author writing about two protagonists like the Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty? This is very difficult to write. I have no idea of ​​reading it at the moment. I will give it a try when I see it from other places in the future.

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After reading it, I can see that the author wrote with intention, but there is still a lack of writing, there are many problems, and it still needs polishing. It's basically the same as when I wrote it myself. I tried my best to write it, but in some places I overwrote it. A brief mention, outline design is very difficult. A plot that lasts less than a month must explain the background, characters, humanities, promote the plot, etc. It is too difficult for a novice who does not write as he pleases! I won't say much else, just keep writing, it can be seen that you are still very careful