Cage Locks the World

Please give me some readers. Let's see if you have any comments. It follows the same three rules as Mysterious Resurrection, but with some modifications. If you have any good suggestions, you can give them and the author will reply to them one by one.

I just read this book and found three problems First, the protagonist did not speak his first line until Chapter 5. Is the pace too slow? Second, I objectively say that if you delete the first two chapters and start the first chapter with Chapter 3, the overall quality will be improved a lot Third, there are too many psychological descriptions, even more like repetitions. The protagonist does not communicate with other people, which will reduce the sense of substitution. Without changes in actions and scenes, it will affect the substitution even more. I mean the scene change with the protagonist as the center of the perspective. It's not just a scene change I've only read five chapters, so I found these more obvious problems Okay, I think my words have touched your soul. I don't want a straw, I'm leaving