Night Patrolman of the Apocalypse

To be honest, your early work on the Metaverse was pretty good. But what is important in online writing now is that it must have explosive and exciting points in the early stage. I have only read the first five chapters of this book. I only know that Golden Finger can absorb negative power or positive power, but what is the specific effect? The activation energy of the panel has been exceeded, but it still cannot be activated. Do you think you are leaving this in suspense? If no clear cheat codes were given in the first three chapters, most readers would have given up on the book. This pace is too slow. In this fast-paced society, there is no competitiveness. The protagonist also has a younger brother, why do we have to write about a younger brother? Writing about the protagonist's family, unless you are very confident in your own writing skills, is really harmful rather than helpful. Or does your brother have a very important plot? In order to make family members the protagonist's weakness? You were threatened from the beginning. How do you think people will continue to watch you? We must conform to the trend of the times. The early stage writing of Metaverse felt really good. I have given you a golden finger that can increase your wisdom. Why do you have to wait until Chapter 11 to activate your golden finger? Skip directly to the chapter about the activation of the golden finger. It turns out that the operation of the golden finger still requires energy. Brother is really speechless. Since you need energy to run, you should activate it as soon as possible. Who has time to watch you grow up now? Fans of the Metaverse were also consumed by the first two eunuch books. Logically speaking, a fourth-level author like you would usually have 500 collections for a book of 50,000 words, right? As a result, the pace of your book is still so slow. To be honest, I'd better delete and rewrite it. It's 50,000 words. I don't have many fans yet, and not many people will read it. It's still too late. Reduce sunk costs.

What kind of writing is this? How dare a student, the male protagonist, threaten a big shot and like to obscenity so much?

The protagonist is portrayed as a bit disgusting. He wants benefits, doesn't want to take risks, wants to live in peace, but also wants to control his own destiny. A proper diode

The novel is not a thesis, the progress of the main plot is too slow, it is all about daily life

The essence is science + fantasy, but the nature of science itself is destined to only apply scientific concepts. This is normal. It is also a common method in novels to use results to skip complicated processes. The characteristics of big data practice are nothing more than that it can be reproduced, can be mass-produced, emphasizes theory and practice, has no shortcomings, and can be perfected. What everyone wants to see is nothing more than exploring the practice step by step. This is the main line. The biggest problem with scientific cultivation themes is that no one writes them, because in this impetuous era, even novels do not like to create new setting systems. Shuangwen and fan fiction are very popular, but this does not mean that traditional novels are not good, it just means that capital is convenient to promote. The biggest advantage of this genre is that it can be read with your mind. Although the nature of science-based fantasy is a product of the rules of the world and cannot be completely scientific like the real world, it is enough as a novel. At the end of writing the Metaverse, I felt that the author was very confused and didn't know what to write. In fact, it is very simple. It is to create a new world view, and then the protagonist relies on a thinking logic that is similar to or surpasses modern times to greatly reduce the difficulty and uncertainty of practice. One of the essences of big data practice is self-reliance. Yes, there is middle school. If you really don't know what to write, then put aside the shackles of the existing world view and keep only the core of "scientific", that is, ignoring the foundation, efficient utilization, rapid breakthroughs, and unnatural understanding. If you are weak and cheat yourself, you will be a very good protagonist in fantasy novels.

Big data practice system, version 4.0 New book released. From the submission in July last year to the release in July this year, I have rewritten it from scratch three times, with countless major and minor revisions. The writing difficulty of this subject is far beyond expectation. "Big Data Cultivation" is the first part of the series, and it ends badly. "Cosmic Brain Practice" was an initial attempt, but it actually fell apart later on. It can even be said that the first chapter was written crookedly. "I Learn to Evolve in the End Times" has a reluctant beginning, but the setting is still awkward. From the initial idea to today, it took five years to polish a setting and outline. But Tianya still feels unsatisfactory. Everyone is welcome to complain, leave comments, and criticize. As long as it's not a direct insult, Tianya will try his best to reply. If you don't believe me, you can read the messages on "Cosmic Brain Cultivation". Finally, I would like to thank the many readers who have accompanied me along the way. Tianya wants to say, I have not given up. Please stay tuned for the new book, and everyone is welcome to express your own opinions and participate in the promotion and development of the plot.

The first sentence of the introduction is so brainless, and the ending is so crooked.

OK, I think the writing is pretty good, 😁

I thought I could read the book after looking at the title. Hey, there really should be a threshold for writing online articles and getting an author certificate. They are all written by people who graduated from compulsory education. They are creating rubbish.

Feeling that conversations and actions often come out of nowhere