Ruling the Dreamscape, Starting with a Sleeping Witch

Personally, when I saw the author not using common vocabulary on the grounds that "there are no relevant allusions to another world", I didn't think the author was very rigorous, but felt very awkward. After all, this online article is written for Chinese readers, and it is also written in Chinese. Essentially, all words are "translated." I have never heard of anyone translating father in law as "father in law" instead of father-in-law in daily usage scenarios, even if these three English words have nothing to do with "yue". Author, if you really want to talk about your cultural setting of another world, just mention it at the beginning.

Should the dictionary be written to the end of the chapter and would it be better to use the sequential coding system specified in GB/T 7714?

This book is not popular, it would swallow three kilograms of feces🤓🤓🤓

In my personal opinion, the two highlights of this book are the smooth and interesting writing and the idea of ​​marrying Sleeping Beauty, but apart from these two items, it can only be said to be lackluster. 1. The presence of the main plot is almost zero, either it is a vague and broad background like tides, or it is an established content such as a wedding that can be seen at a glance 2. The protagonist is extremely empty inside, dreams are golden fingers, knowledge/art/culture is stolen... Throw away these protagonists, what is left? Even his good looks can be attributed to the inheritance from cheap parents in another world. The protagonist's own characteristics and charm are really not apparent. Even the actions revolve around others. Today if the Duke wants to rebel, he will help with advice, and tomorrow if his fiancée wants to go to school, he will arrange to accompany her... Does the protagonist have any specific plans? It is unimaginable that a male protagonist with such low subjective initiative can appear in an online novel 3. The heroine still has some mystery and benign perception at the beginning, but the more she reveals, the more unpleasant she becomes. Especially the choice of permanent sleep directly puts people on a lower level. She thinks this is reciprocal revenge, but have you ever considered that the cause of all this is that she forced herself to die by drinking the potion and falling asleep? She was wronged because her family was facing the risk of extermination. As for how this risk came about, you don't have to ask. When fighting each other, one has to consider the fact that the one who flirted first is a bitch, and when it is her turn, she simply ignores that it was her who stabbed Lou. Is this retaliation really equal? You can still perform the Sleeping Dream Arhat Fist even if you're asleep, right?

The two catchy points are that the daughter-in-law and daughter-in-law did not spell it out clearly. The extraordinary is still sequence nine before it is put on the shelves. It keeps spreading daily. Are you preparing to dominate the European continent?

When I saw the beginning, I was a little speechless. Especially when the Duke asks about the protagonist's life experience, it's not like he is out and about, the identity is given by himself. The protagonist lives under the rule of a duke. Is it difficult for the duke to know the protagonist's life experience? Wouldn't it be better to send someone to investigate?

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The heroine has communicated with the protagonist several times in the dream, and the most critical information of one year to wake up is not told to the protagonist, so it is very abstract, making the Riddler

After reading Chapter 80, I will share my opinion. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, and the characters' actions and actions have their own stances and motivations, and are not stiff. But the problem is that now it looks too bland and lacks conflict. The protagonist is attached to the Duke, and the previous protagonist and highlights are even robbed by the Duke. This shows that the protagonist is not proactive enough, and the golden finger is not golden enough, and it is impossible to see where it exceeds the standard. The heroine has too few roles, and the only impression she has on her is the label of beauty, which cannot be remembered. Both the male and female protagonists are not bright enough and their supporting roles take away a lot of their highlights. If the protagonist did not choose to rely entirely on the Duke, but instead danced on the tip of a knife between the church and the Duke, it might be better to gain recognition from both parties. The lack of a strong enough crisis or villain is the main reason for the dullness of the story.

The writing is very average. Why do you write so many daily routines like the Lord of Mysteries?