The Fall of the Tang Dynasty

At the beginning of the Five Dynasties period, the people's hearts were restless and difficult to control; even ordinary soldiers harbored ambitions of becoming generals. It wasn't until around the time of Chai Rong that the people gradually grew weary of war, which allowed Zhao Kuangyin's coup to succeed, and his successful "releasing military power over a cup of wine."

Why is it always about white fish and dragon robes? It's well written, but the constant use of white fish and dragon robes is really off-putting. Even if you don't think there's a problem, those ministers don't try to dissuade you even at the cost of their lives. The boss is always out there, and he and his two or three friends often cause trouble in enemy territory. This isn't a martial arts world where you can just say you're a hundred-man slayer and actually beat a hundred people.

The plot design, pacing, and writing style are all so skillful! Reading the latest chapter in one go was truly exhilarating.

I watched part of it and everything was great – the plot was good, the pacing was good – but the dialogue between the characters was just too colloquial. It didn't feel like ancient people at all. I'm not saying it should be written in classical Chinese, but it should at least be similar to the style of Water Margin, like the colloquial language of ancient people, not the colloquial language of modern people.

It's okay, but watchable. In the author's words, they are more like humans.

Write more female protagonists. Things like 1v1, 8v1, 10v1... Readers love that.

Please be sure to add some interactions with the female lead and their romantic relationships to enrich the story. Conquering the land without beautiful women by your side is boring.

Actually, this book is quite good, but the biggest problem I felt after reading it was its emphasis on individual heroism. While capturing enemy generals and flags is a general's military achievement, no general achieves it through one-on-one combat. What's the point of a one-on-one duel? No matter how strong you are, a single stab will leave a hole, not to mention the presence of crossbows.

Could you please write less about romance and waste some coins?

The parts that follow history are fine, but it gets a bit awkward when you start to change things up. But I understand, since that's how everyone else writes it. In my personal opinion, sending someone back to ancient times is like throwing them into a chaotic African tribe.