Eldritch Gods Invade, So I Stuff Them All into My Equipment Slots

It's tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw it away.

What is the essence of a "cool" novel? First, it needs a tight plot; second, it needs frequent updates to keep readers engaged. If a "cool" novel only focuses on inner monologues and hasn't even reached its climax, I'll drop it immediately.

It's a bit illogical. The world setting is similar to a wasteland, but humans can still hold onto a city with a population of 30 million, which means there is still a basic order and combat system. But the protagonist, who just awakened his abilities and registered, is immediately summoned to fight monsters, which is ridiculous.

If the level cap is so low that only this much experience is needed to level up, how are other people supposed to level up?

This protagonist talks to himself all day long, blurting out whatever comes to mind. Does he want to die even faster? In this extraordinary world where all kinds of powers exist, can't the protagonist be a little more careful?

Your worthless hero name could be easily changed to adventurer without any sense of incongruity, and even the reading experience would be better. So where are the heroes? 🙂Adventurer Guild, A-rank, B-rank, or Bronze-rank adventurers are much more pleasing to the eye than your worthless hero.

The subject matter is alright, but it keeps writing some inexplicable things. A supporting character's inner monologue can fill two chapters, while the protagonist's inner monologue can fill one chapter.

For an author who has written several books, why does the insertion of world-building and plot progression feel so forced and disjointed (requiring readers to fill in the gaps with their own imagination)?

The subject matter is good, and the world view is also good, but the author likes to write some irrelevant content and make all sorts of comments. It's all just padding the word count. If you're just killing monsters and leveling up, and learning skills, then just learn skills. Why bother with so much background information and personal opinions?

The plot was progressing well, but then in chapters 25, 26, and 27, suddenly the main theme disappeared, and it all became a woman's inner monologue. What's going on?!