I’m a Pokémon Trainer in the Mechanical Department

In Pokémon, the Steel type represents the power of metal, but what about the Machine type?

Which cover is better?

For the mechanical class, I think you could build some of the characters from Seer, since there are quite a few in there.

I couldn't even finish the first few chapters. There's such a huge plot hole: the protagonist's father is an authority figure, and his mother is an assistant, strictly protected by the government, making it impossible for them to harm him. Yet, their own child is harmed, failing tests five times, and the parents do nothing? What kind of logic is this? It's infuriating!

The mechanical design is great, but the plot is a bit toxic.

Hmm, that Dragon Emperor Alliance is so useless. The protagonist's parents are so important, yet the alliance doesn't offer any other protection for their child.

Mechanical Pokémon? That'll banish my sleepiness! This is practically an invincible Cyberdragon! Rebuilding Cyberdragon's glory is our inescapable duty!

Does this region not have its own Pokémon? Don't they have their own starter Pokémon? Are there no region-specific pseudo-gods or legendary beasts? Without these, can it still be called an alliance? Does this region have any unique skills? You might as well write a parallel world of Pokémon or follow the original Pokémon world.

I think Steel and Electric types pair well with Mechanical types, but... How do you convert a Metagross, a Pokémon made entirely of metal, into a Mechanical type?

I really don't know what the point of writing about Ye Zishan is? Pure poison!