Marvel's Superman: Starting in The Boys

It can be seen that the author wants to use the conflict between DC Superman and the black-robed world hero to create a black humorous effect, but the author is not strong enough in writing and wants to please some readers who want to read invincible novels, so the protagonist you are describing is also blocked on both sides. People who are happy can't see the dramatic effect and feel that he is like a noob hero. People who are cool feel that Chapter 20 of Granny's kung fu should be enough to break stars with one punch. Why are there still unruly people who refuse to surrender? It seems that the author has to make a choice👀

The plot characters are well written, and the plot is also full of ups and downs. But the protagonist is really a bit of a doormat. Chun Chun wants to fuck him no matter who sees him. No matter whether he wins the fight or not, just fuck him and that's it.

The writing is smooth, the logic is smooth, and the emotional line rejects the ambiguous relationship between Xiao Tongran and Maeve. I wonder if Storm Girl intends to consider Azu? If he doesn't switch studios and run away in the later stage, he still has great potential Superman, who is known for his low magic resistance, is forced to get involved in the field of magic. According to the settings of other worldviews, low magic resistance also means high magic affinity. Whether the Kryptonians in this game have such a possibility is worth looking forward to The worldview is mainly the world of black robes , what drives the plot is the unexpected arrival of the troublesome crow from DC, so the black-robed main world involving magic exists parallel to the DC universe and uses the magic system of other American TV series (such as the evil power of Soldier Man), or has it been integrated into the DC Dark Multiverse and become the magical agent of the Upside Down? Looking forward to the follow-up development As a time traveler, the protagonist only knows DC and does not know the black robe. He mistakes the locomotive for a member of the Speed ​​Force. Does this mean that a conflict will be created through the comparison of the two worldviews? Will they take Azu's place and reshape the seven-member group into Zhenglian? However, as a highly publicized and popular idol group, if they don't break away from Walt, where will they have the time to study magic? If you leave and lose your protective umbrella, how will you cope with the pressure from all walks of life? There is also the blond farm girl who awakens her telekinesis powers at the beginning. I'm sorry I didn't see the prototype and I don't know if it's original. The only thing that comes to mind is the heroine in "Looper". In short, it's worth looking forward to

When I read Batman Supreme before, someone recommended this book and said it was comparable to Chen Bat's Superman Supreme. However, after reading the previous black robe plot, I felt that the protagonist was too stretched. If the character before time travel was changed to be very loveless and like to bury his head in the sand after constant failure. The ostrich in the story can barely understand the protagonist's suffocation operation, but the author insists that it was a war reporter who time-traveled into Superman, well... It's hard to comment Personal poisonous points: 1. He died after traveling for fifteen years and knowing his Kryptonian identity from the beginning. I am unwilling to try to master my own abilities, nor am I willing to use my own eyes to understand the world I traveled through 2. After sacrificing my adoptive parents and losing my anger inexplicably, I engaged in a lot of confusing American drama behaviors, and after doing so, I "sincerely" apologized to the other party, and And he is never willing to use his own brain to think and recall the plot of the comic. Even if he is beaten every day, he only knows how to put on an unhappy expression and rush forward, and then continue to be pressured. It is no different from a 250 person 3. It's so boring that I can't stand it at all.

The parents died at the beginning, and then the raven didn't know why it was necessary to add it, and he and Walter got together with the storm girl Iron Nazi, who is more than a hundred years old, and then the protagonist is like an older child, stupid and stupid, and he doesn't know the plot.

The protagonist is a real mother-in-law. Sometimes she wants to be an ordinary person, sometimes she wants to save her adoptive parents, and sometimes she wants to be a superhero to save the doomed Flashpoint universe. She was worried that the Three Palace Demons would forget all about it again. She even forgot that there is a Marvel Universe with the same personality as DC, the Ultimate Eraser, the Cosmic Control Rod, the Heart of the Universe, and the DC Universe also has some spirit of existence, the Anti-Life Equation, the Mobius Chair, etc. The protagonist is just like a headless fly thinking about everything.

There are so many controversial aspects in this book that it gave me a headache. The main reason is that the protagonist set by the author wants to grow up through various philosophies and struggles, but I feel that the protagonist has a serious illness and is stupid. For example, killing Fury is like being pickled. I don't know the plot of the black robe, so I got together with the disgusting Storm, and then killed him because he knew that Storm was doing evil and then went into an emo state. I didn't read the rest of it, mainly because I couldn't stand this kind of protagonist. According to my estimation, there will definitely be a bloody amnesia plot in the future. Maybe this is Wen Qing.

There are too many inner dramas. After thinking about it, I feel like I am brainwashing myself, and I feel like I am lying to myself.

Regarding being a typical Japanese comic hero in the world of American comics, although I have tremendous power, I choose to be an ordinary person. However, I have never tried to control my power in order to protect my ordinary life. If you are a book lover who has a deep understanding of American comics, you can give it a try. If you don't have one or have a rough understanding of it, I don't recommend it. Otherwise, the first three will make you die of poison.

Mother-in-law and mother-in-law are exactly the same as Shabi DC

The writing is messy, and the characters are not straightforward. Regardless of whether it is good or bad, it feels like it is a mess, which affects the acquisition of reading content. The style is not fixed, and it feels like the author scribbled at will. In short, there is no gradual progress, climax or interest in reading. A bit messy

Yes, very superman, really, a superman who doesn't care whether to kill or not, and has no moral obsessiveness. Why! Is it so frustrating to write? Knowing that he is a Kryptonian, he does not want to develop the power that a Kryptonian should have. As long as it is strong enough, the Kryptonian's biological force field can directly resurrect people. Even if he becomes a silver superman, he can resurrect people. With so many methods of resurrection, he is wasting time in a meaningless multiverse... What is this thinking?

Superman encounters a crisis Superman is in a desperate situation Superman's defeat is determined Superman gives a speech What a powerful enemy, I will never forget you before the next crisis

I can tolerate the ups and downs of the protagonist's character, I can accept the ups and downs of the protagonist's moral standards, and I can ignore the protagonist's inner monologue that comes every once in a while and shows no growth afterwards... I can only accept the messy escape transitions in the narrative. Halfway through writing a story paragraph, I suddenly switch to another set to talk about another thing that is not strongly related to the previous paragraph, and is not even at the same point in time. I know they make sense logically, and I also know that they will definitely be patched afterwards to make everything appear reasonable and coherent, but bro, the story must be a story first, and logic second. This kind of evasive writing method of "I feel a little confused in the middle of writing, so I will change the scene first and make up for it later" is a fatal blow to the continuity of the story. Especially the sudden change of the black robe, which is so sudden that it is outrageous. You have to know that when you started writing about the various misunderstandings of a Superman protagonist who has never seen The Black Robe in the Black Robe universe, you have already completed the first reader screening. Then, when you abused the transition fragmented narrative and wrote hundreds of thousands of words on the Black Robe set, you completed the second reader screening. At this point, the only readers left behind are readers who can tolerate the trivial plot lines and ignore most other shortcomings for the sake of the Black Robe plot. But! You are here, when the plot of Black Robe is getting better and the various threads of the story are about to be figured out, suddenly a Flashpoint Paradox occurs. The protagonist, as a time traveler who has watched DC, unpreparedly starts to play with time. As a result, he is banned from the world of Black Robe (you can't go back within at least hundreds of thousands of words after looking at the catalog). And this is the third and most intense reader screening of this book. Readers who were able to survive the early stages of the Black Robe World are waiting for you to finish writing this story, or at least for a phased conclusion. As a result, they suddenly transferred to the DC studio, and then repeatedly jumped between DC and Marvel, and their return to the Black Robe studio is far away... How many people do you think can be left after this third screening? How much is left in your click-to-book conversion rate?

Raven: "Although it was me who caused the death of your parents, I hope you can put aside your hatred and desire to resurrect your parents as soon as possible, and come and fight with me against my father, the Three-Gong Demon!" Protagonist: "I don't want Qingmei's gift. I am very sad and angry when my parents are dead. I choose to have a fight with a strange old woman!"

The black robe in the title of the book might make passers-by think that a superman from the motherland came running in. But after reading a few chapters, he realized that it didn't suit him, so he just ranted and left. Why don't the author try changing his name?

The biggest problem with this book is that it keeps creating problems without solving them. It puts aside the problems of its own world and the two worlds at the beginning, and engages in full parallel world roaming and timeline roaming. Even if the time flow rate is different, it can't be ignored, right? There is no one with a fast flow rate? ! How long has it been? It's long past time for the Flashpoint Universe to go to war. It's time for Three Houses to destroy the Black Robes. Marvel's Doctor Doom has destroyed so many worlds. In the end, I'm almost becoming the villain who destroys parallel universes. I haven't solved any of the appeals issues and I'm still being beaten. How about you go back and destroy all the universes you've experienced? I can still stop the losses. I'm numb.

This book is really unreadable. One hole is left unfilled, and then another hole appears. Characters suddenly appear, and all the big events are messed up. The author doesn't think it's very attractive to write like this.

Seeing that the protagonist is still struggling with some inexplicable things, feeling troubled, and still "growing up", I am completely tired of watching it.

Write whatever comes to mind, whatever comes to mind, regardless of the reader's experience, the author is happy writing anyway.

The protagonist is basically equivalent to an invincible young man from the DC Justice League universe, capable of defeating 99% of the people in the universe, but always being beaten by 1% of the people Now that I have seen more than 200 chapters, the author is still expanding the world, it is like going to Steam to buy a super combo pack of a game n years ago Buy all the DLC together The whole family bucket, and then entered the game and just touched this dlc, which dlc touched, just did not complete the task The protagonist has been going to the new world crazily, what is the situation in the old world, if you can't beat it, just leave it alone, just like escaping, looking for a way to save the world, it looks very disgusting, because there is no completion of the chapter, all is opening a new map , Flashpoint, D-Marvel, Invincible Young Man, monsters are everywhere in every universe But I have to say that the protagonist is worthy of the name Superman. From the beginning, he was an ordinary time traveler, maintaining a normal human mind without changing his ancestors. He was not completely corrupted when he came into contact with poison, but began to stand up and take responsibility to help various worlds It is often said that the heroine of the Virgin is difficult to write, but the protagonist is decisive in killing and has a lot of empathy, compassion, justice, etc. Of a normal person. It can be said that he is worthy of the name of Superman. In my opinion, it is much better than the brainless ancestors, because I have seen too many. It can be said that it is quite rare to see a protagonist who thinks normally, is not controlled by power, and is even good.

In the author's statement, I cursed Black Robe. This b-drama uses a closed multi-line narrative. After I finished it, I wrote more than a dozen multi-line narratives.

The pace was too uncomfortable. It was really exciting at first, but as I went on, I found that none of the original problems had been solved, and new problems kept popping up. At least don't be pushed away by unexpected events.

The author's portrayal of the character Raven is simply inexplicable. The accident caused by her caused the protagonist to lose his parents She has no regrets The protagonist decided to forgive her based on her one-sided words ? ? ? What logic

So, are there any explanations for "the raven killed the protagonist's parents and still insists on reasoning" and "a lot of magical American TV dramas without anger"? If the author didn't fill in these later, I personally feel that there is no need to watch it, unless the author is writing this kind of abstract plot like an American TV series, then there is no need to say, this is the purpose, but writing these normally is the poisonous point of incorrect three views.

There are too many branch plots, and the plot changes too quickly. Let alone the protagonist, the reader will be breathless. The key point is that the protagonist's combat power is always suppressed.

A completely blind transition, the foreshadowing of Dalian, the key characters, and the key events. Invisible when you say invisible, give up when you say give up, there are so many holes dug but not buried, what a bullshit, I originally came here for the black robe, at least give it more roles, it's not interesting at all to engage in a bunch of bloody sitcoms from DC Marvel.

I was so convinced that after reading a few chapters, I was fed shit.

Didn't you say that you were kidding me at the beginning? In the first 20 chapters, they tried their best to make the protagonist crumble in front of this raven. He used mental control to eliminate his emotions, and he also came over and lectured the protagonist crazily. Do you think your writing like this can really make readers read it? I just read Chapter 17 and I feel that my anger has been aroused. Even if you start the chapter with Lu Mingfei of the Dragon Clan, you still pretend to be a big one in front of your high school classmates. Later, you go to Kassel and pretend to be a big one. Now I have subscribed for a few chapters just to say something to others later. If you can't accept such a frustrating plot in the early stage, it is best not to read this book.

I have read more than 180 chapters, and it feels like the protagonist doesn't even have time to eat, and is constantly thrashing. This problem is not solved yet, and he is doing that again. It feels very confusing. Is it still such a mess in the back? I don't plan to chase anymore.