I Became a Warlord in Mexico

Maybe I've read too many fast food articles and now I don't even have any patience anymore. The author likes to bury the thread too much, and it always feels like the writing is in a fog, which makes me confused.

The writing style is there, but the pace is too slow. The problems at the beginning have not been solved until chapter 46. In this fast-paced era, few people can read this kind of writing. For example, I think now that the beginning is just like this, will there be more ink later on? A warlord novel should be about developing power, so how can you learn to be a detective?

As the saying goes, without investigation, there is no right to speak. As the second person to read the latest chapter, I feel that the entire article does not involve the main purpose of the article. Although the entire plot is compact and smooth, it feels a bit fragmented. I think that the number of words in the article should be increased or subtracted so that readers can clearly understand the protagonist's state from a God's perspective, what to do, and what affects him around him. I don't feel this way.

The current excitement is enough to make people patiently wait for the hidden clues.