I Became a Warlord in Mexico

Maybe I've been reading too many fast-paced novels, because I've lost all patience now. The author loves to plant too many foreshadowing elements, making the writing feel confusing and leaving me bewildered.

The writing style is there, but the pacing is too slow. The initial problems haven't been resolved by chapter 46, and in this fast-paced era, few people can keep up with this kind of story. For example, I'm thinking now, if the beginning is this drawn-out, will it get even more drawn-out later on? A warlord story should be about developing power, not about being a detective.

As the saying goes, "No investigation, no right to speak." As the second person to finish reading the latest chapter, I felt that the entire article did not address the main theme. Although the plot was tight and coherent, it felt somewhat disjointed. I think the word count should be adjusted to give readers a god-like perspective, allowing them to clearly understand the protagonist's situation, what he is doing, and what influences his surroundings. I didn't feel that way.

The current exciting moments are enough to keep people patiently waiting for the hidden plot lines to unfold.