After Chatting with Sun Wukong Online for Three Years, I Became the Military Advisor of the Demon Court.

If it is the core business of the protagonist, it should be written in the introduction. Half of the first ten chapters are about playing football

How does the protagonist know that the netizen Brother Monkey is discussing with him the prehistoric version of Journey to the West?

The author loves writing about football so much that you might as well use my title as the title of the book. There is too much football content, but I don't see the point or the necessity to write so much.

After reading the introduction, I have a question: Wukong can cross the universe to fish for people. This strength has surpassed Hongmeng. Even Little Heaven can't do it alone?

What kind of novel is this? Interdimensional chat novel. Urban supernatural novel, or football novel? How come there are tens of thousands of words, but two-thirds of them are about football?

No, I can't stand it anymore. Come on.

The industry in the world of Journey to the West is different from the industry in the real world. First of all, in terms of materials, the material strength of Westward Journey World is stronger than all materials in the real world, and in terms of material diversification, Westward Journey World is even better. Taken together, if Westward Journey engages in industry, with the same technical level, Westward Journey will be N times stronger. The difference lies in material strength and material richness.

Two-line narrative, slow pace, no desire to catch up on updates, no traffic, destined to die on the shelves

After removing the content of the ball, the look and feel actually improved.

How about you change it to a football novel?

Will the protagonist die if he doesn't play football? One sentence after another is too disturbing to the senses. The key point is bullshit football. This is not a competitive article. Who wants to watch bullshit football? The number of words is not that bad.

In college, in class football games, there is a physical education teacher as a coach, and a teacher leads the team to practice? Unheard of, maybe I went to a fake university.

This is well written, very immersive

Why doesn't it look smooth at all?

Unexpected and very immersive. Starting from writing about the protagonist's kicking and the development of Sun Wukong's world, the setting and emotions slowly advance. It feels like I used to watch "I'm Really Not the Savior" by Things in Fire and "My Autobiography Can't Be a Tragedy" by Kong Changqing. With Calm Daily, more than fifty chapters are spent introducing the character relationships, setting the world, and gradually leading to the apocalyptic crisis. Except for being a little shorter now, it is really good.

I took a look at the comment section of the author's previous novels. I didn't expect it to be finished, and it had good reviews from masters.

Master Ma is the real protagonist, awesome

People are reading books. Has Yaoting become a rapist?

There is too much nonsense, the stereotype always regards the opponent as a black guy, and the originator of the qigong type should belong to the shaman training system, but he still has not escaped from the Three Realms system. Furthermore, I feel that the protagonist is not smart at all. No wonder the results are not ideal